Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem. A good cry can be a great tension release. I wondered about the colors, but it figured it was ekaphrastic, right? Good job on this and good luck!

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

He F... thanks for reading and the stellar review. yours, diana

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What a mesmerizing artwork to showcase your Four-Line poem! I admired your "Rivers" metaphor and use of alliteration. Best wishes in the competition and have a serene weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Hi Joan: thanks for your thoughtful review. thanks for the stars. yours, diana

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Wonderful poem and words of wisdom, Art. Tears most certainly do serve a function of renewal. Your carefully selected words choices shine with brilliance. I really like this one.

Best of luck to you in the contest. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Hi Gloria...Thanks for your good wishes and your thoughtful comments. yours, diana

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Cheers, ArtAsylum;
-besides all the colors in the universe, there are the colors of love that's all around, you just have to let it in, when you've done an excellent job in expressing this love through your poem.
-As finding an avenue to discover and enjoy blessed through the colors of life.
-I have a sneaky suspicion that you are the artist of this beautiful painting or drawing?
-Thank you for sharing this, ArtAsylum, and take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alex
PS: best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Hey Krys... thanks so much for stopping by and enjoying my words enhanced by the visual... yours, diana

reply by krys123 on 21-Apr-2018

You're welcome, Diana.
Cherio
Alex

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

Tears, I know them so well. Release is almost an understatement. They can say everything you want to say, without the words. I love the picture, with all the colors, which your last line incorporates color into it.
Good luck in the contest.

lulube

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

He Lulube... thanks so much for your thoughtful and stellar review. yours, diana

reply by Lulube on 21-Apr-2018

welcome

lulube

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

I found this work to be super captivating right from go. with astoundingly gripping artwork and a brief but powerful message so nicely delivered. I have no suggestions to make this work and better and than this author for a delightful read, HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Hey Your Grayness. good to see you in my little shop. Thanks for your very positive reviews. yours, diana

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Art, this an interesting poem and a good entry to the four line poetry contest. Well worded and it would make a good message on a card. I wish you well in the contest. Good luck. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thanks for the good wishes Dorothy... Good idea a CARD...thanks for the idea. yours, diana

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Profound truth in four lines. Tears can wash away the pain and stain like a river. Sweet relief and peace will follow. Artwork is perfect. Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Hey June... thanks for your support and thoughtful review. not to mention this stars

Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

I love the picture you paint so vividly with your well-chosen words. I can see the tiny rainbows cast by the crystal shimmer of tears in the sunlight. A very well written poem!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Hey Beck. thanks kiddo for your stellar review and the thoughtful support. yours, dianaThanks

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, ArtAsylum,

Good poem. I wish you all the luck in the contest. This picture fits your poem.

Congratulations on Recognition and All Time Best! Love the All Time Best. :D

Take care,
Nome

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Hey Jasmine... thanks for the good wishes... fingers crossed. yours, diana