Precious Gems
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Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very well written poem with beautiful words and beautiful art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. We don't really have spring or winter here right now. One minute cold and the next really warm. love, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Donna, This is a very well written poem with beautiful words and beautiful art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. We don't really have spring or winter here right now. One minute cold and the next really warm. love, Teri
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna
Comment from Gert sherwood
Very good dovemarie
I like you well written poem about April snow
it rhymes so good. and love the framed pictures of the birds who came thinking they were going to see April Showers!
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Very good dovemarie
I like you well written poem about April snow
it rhymes so good. and love the framed pictures of the birds who came thinking they were going to see April Showers!
Gert
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Dear Gert, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I'm so sorry for you that are still living with so much snow. Winter seems never ending for you this year. In FL we don't even have anything that you could call "winter" just "cooler". I get kind a sick of that too. Great job on the poem and great pics.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I'm so sorry for you that are still living with so much snow. Winter seems never ending for you this year. In FL we don't even have anything that you could call "winter" just "cooler". I get kind a sick of that too. Great job on the poem and great pics.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Dear Roxanna, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove (PS. I always think about Florida sunshine, but I guess that's not what is happening down there now. Maybe the earth is changing, and that's why we're having all this out-of-season weather.)
Comment from Miriam Collins
Wonderful Spring poem! This is exactly how I feel today, the weather just doesn't know what to do and I feel terrible for the little birdies out there. I love the descriptive "fertile-brown pieces of earth", would love to read more of this type of description! And I absolutely love "I tried to have a Spring Fling...But, alas, snow covered everything!", very funny! I think we all are feeling that way right now. Your poem is so pretty and sweet just like Spring, and I'm definitely ready for it to be here and I think the birds do too. Great job!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Wonderful Spring poem! This is exactly how I feel today, the weather just doesn't know what to do and I feel terrible for the little birdies out there. I love the descriptive "fertile-brown pieces of earth", would love to read more of this type of description! And I absolutely love "I tried to have a Spring Fling...But, alas, snow covered everything!", very funny! I think we all are feeling that way right now. Your poem is so pretty and sweet just like Spring, and I'm definitely ready for it to be here and I think the birds do too. Great job!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Dear Kelsey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from RodG
This poem perfectly described the morning scene at my house this morning. You draw a picture of browns and greens intermixed because of the snow. And you used rhyme well. This poem should appeal to a very wide audience.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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This poem perfectly described the morning scene at my house this morning. You draw a picture of browns and greens intermixed because of the snow. And you used rhyme well. This poem should appeal to a very wide audience.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Dear RodG, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
As a fellow Mass. Resident I can vouch for the veracite of this poem. It is in the forties again today! Most are beyond impatient...
This wnter is bare knckling it, holding on!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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As a fellow Mass. Resident I can vouch for the veracite of this poem. It is in the forties again today! Most are beyond impatient...
This wnter is bare knckling it, holding on!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, I didn't know you were from Mass. too! Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Western Mass......Greater Springfield area.....
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel for you! When winter lingers it means a short spring and a long hot summer! "Sweet sparrow hunting for food, hopping around in the icy snow,". poor things. I heard that it is 22 degrees celsius in England with sun all day! I think they have spring! Can't wait to return, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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I feel for you! When winter lingers it means a short spring and a long hot summer! "Sweet sparrow hunting for food, hopping around in the icy snow,". poor things. I heard that it is 22 degrees celsius in England with sun all day! I think they have spring! Can't wait to return, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. I hope you return to England soon! Where are you now? Dove
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In the Canaries x
