Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

This is quite a beautiful prayer to God, spoken with
sincerity and humility.
In line four did you mean "I try to BRING smiles" I think its might be a typo.
I wish you the best in the contest.
This should do very well.
Nancy

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you Nancy. You are right I do mean Bring. Corrected it, I know God understands.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the A Poem About God writing prompt.
Your lovely verse sounds like a prayer.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018

Thank you Sharon.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

very spiritual and uplifting devotional work. it starts out strong and never loses its pace. this should do very well in the Poem about God prompt contest. good luck and God's speed.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your poem is like a letter to God, and we often write our letters and hope they will be answered, so many of us are in need of his support, I wish you luck with the contest, 'you cannot sleep because there is work to be done', I like that line, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thanks Dolly. now you know why I'm always tired.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

This writing prompt has bern very healing to writers and readers alike. I imagine God is very h a ppy to be hearing heartful words from beleivers. A blessed post.

Karenina

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thank you karenina.Thanks Diana

reply by karenina on 19-Apr-2018

YOu are welcome!

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

This is a very personal letter to God... You thank God for being in your life... you have committed to be in his life also.. your second half is a plea for strength and to find your way to happiness and love. Very nice yours, diana

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thanks Diana. We all need someone to talk to.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written heartfelt poem to God. You used very sincere words and very interesting and lovely art work. Since God is all seeing and all knowing I just bet He saw you as you penned this. I bet you made Him smile really big! Very nice job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thank you Teri. A smile is always beautiful.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a talk with dear God about state of living, prays for continuing help, guidance, love, forgiveness and help finish the quest in life; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018

Thank You AL. I'm happy you're still at it.