The Blessing of the Fleet
a centuries old tradition still lives on3 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What an interesting topic. I enjoyed learning this about shrimping boats. This is a great entry to the 5-7-5 haiku poetry contest. I wish you all the best. Good luck to you!
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What an interesting topic. I enjoyed learning this about shrimping boats. This is a great entry to the 5-7-5 haiku poetry contest. I wish you all the best. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-Note is appreciated.
-Good, descriptive imagery,
as well as using one continuous thought.
-The alliteration adds to the scene
you describe.
-A good entry, good luck.
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-Note is appreciated.
-Good, descriptive imagery,
as well as using one continuous thought.
-The alliteration adds to the scene
you describe.
-A good entry, good luck.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with very fine imagery of the shrimp boat
Solid use of alliteration with the "p" and "b" sounds
Gorgeous picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with very fine imagery of the shrimp boat
Solid use of alliteration with the "p" and "b" sounds
Gorgeous picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
