Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I would punctuate this differently
Go ahead look up and whisper, those soft wishes (Go ahead, look up, and whisper those soft wishes ) it reads better in my opinion

A wonderfully worded poem,my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks so much Debbie for your very good tip on the punctuation. I agree and will certainly edit it! Blessings and thanks HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

The reader found this to be a very interesting poem with lots and lots of imagery. The reader really enjoyed the read and will be back to read more.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018

Thanks so much Harry, for your great review and generous stars, truly appreciated! I hope to see you again soon!! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hello Vance
I love the way you started you poem--
Go ahead look up and whisper, those soft wishes
Blow them towards the fluffy clouds
( very calming),indeed to lay with your eyes and make a wish to God that others find happiness
watching the clouds (with all sort of mystical shapes)
Thank you for sharing
I'm going to respond to you with my thoughts about clouds.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Oh! dear, blessed Gert, thank you so much for your truly lovely review and six stars, so deeply appreciated. I'm waiting with great expectation for your thoughts about clouds, that I'm sure will be nothing short of "MAJESTIC' love and hugs! Vance

reply by Gert sherwood on 17-Apr-2018

Smiles Vance
I will let you know when I post it.

A couple of days (which is not my norm) and really didn't want to do.
Dean Kuch challenged me to write a horror/thriller poem.
It's what to you to read it or not.
Gert
The title is
A Lucid dream I ignored (edited)

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks for the great review and stars as always a great treat to hear from you and let me know where I can read the poem you wrote for Dean. Thanks!

reply by Gert sherwood on 17-Apr-2018

Thank you Vance
It's already posted
I believe it is the first one in my portifilo
(A Lucid dream I ignored (edited)
Hope it doesn't disturb you
Gert

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

You make a brilliant point: we need to stop and show gratitude for the world around us. A puffy cloud is awe-inspiring and you have done a lovely job showcasing that in your poem. Thank God for the beauty of the puffy clouds today! :)

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thank you so much, Cindy, for your lovely review and stars, so much appreciated. GRATITUDE is my prime mission for I know it to be (without question}, the most powerful, delightful, illuminating, uplifting, joyful state of mind one can achieve so I'm an avid advocate of reflecting this as strongly and as often as possible for the good will of everyone. Vance

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This beautifully scribed work is quite definitely in praise mode, with the clouds being God's chariots, with the winds carrying sweet song to the hearts of those appreciating and receptive to His song. What a marvellous thought dear Vance, well done my talented friend, blessings, Roy
Typo : Go ahead(,)

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thanks again Brother Roy for another wonderful review and delightful stars! It is always a joy, and a gift to hear from you! Vance

reply by royowen on 17-Apr-2018

My privilege

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, it is delightful to see a puffy fluffy cloud. And the best response is to look towards God, thank Him and ask to be used to create joy in the world. What a lovely thought, Vance!

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thank you so sincerely lyenochka, for this lovely review and generous stars! What a lovely delight to hear from you always! Vance

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This write has warm sentiments and it is sweet, kind and innocent too! A fluffy cloud of hope, how wonderful that is, loved your faithful write, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Thank you so much Dolly, for your lovely review and stars! It is always my joy and delight to hear from you and your words are always an encouragement and special gift! Blessings always! Vance