Comment from Jm4805

Exceptional

There is nothing quite so amazing as seeing nature in a singular moment, forgetting about yourself and the world you left behind. Beautiful sentiment, lovely picture, wish I was there right now.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks for the comments and the six stars.

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

Well said poem of words hewn from memories treated by love and pride. There is nothing stronger. This poet, truly bound to his muse, releases words of sagacity and beauty as he writes. Well done.

In the second verse, third line "brig" mistyped.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks for the comments.

reply by Henry King on 16-Apr-2018

You are welcome. I wish you a speedy recovery from your surgery.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks beauty comes in many forms, renewed strength comes to light; poet hopes for the muse to return with poetry after his hip replacement; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Dan, such beautiful rhyming throughout this poem. And you are right, beauty takes many forms. I liked the imagery you've produced through your careful word choices and nothing jarred.

Thanks for sharing your poetry, and I would recommend this to other readers for review, Ana.

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Thanks for the comments.