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Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Donna!

Good luck in this contest! I enjoyed all of your nicely rhymed lines... flowers, showers, powers... good stuff here! :) The presentation is beautiful! I love the pic you've chosen!!

Thanks for sharing!

Kim

 Comment Written 01-May-2018


reply by the author on 02-May-2018
    Dear KIm, Thanks for your good luck wishes! I think you won the contest last year, correct me if I'm wrong. Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
reply by ~Dovey on 02-May-2018
    You are correct, I did.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Very nicely done. I lived on the desert for many years, my childhood, and when we got lots of rain we would have lots of wild flowers. I loved when that happened. It was so beautiful. Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Dear Roxanna, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A clever write with rhyming words and a fresh new spring on the horizon. Your words are uplifting and promising and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written three-line poem. April showers are needed to bring forth the May flowers. Although the weather patterns appear to be confused everything normally happens as it should.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove