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For Jane

A poem for my favourite writer.

15 total reviews 
Comment from Sugarray77
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I really enjoyed reading about Jane Austen. She is one of my favorite author's and I think you did a a great job honoring her with this memorial poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks for reading. She's really great, isn't she?
Comment from Ulla
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Awe, Maria Jose, this brought tears to my eyes. I recognised immediately that your wonderful poem was dedicated to Jane Austen. She is indeed one of my favourite authors as well. I loved your beautiful poem. All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    This is a very generous review, Ulla. You are very kind.
    Thanks so much for reading.
    Have a lovely Sunday (what is left of it).
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You have painted a quaint and delicate picture of Jane and her wonderful writings, magical words woven here and my favourite stanza is:

You created treasure,
A milliard gold pages.
Sitting at your desk
You swished your magic wand.

Fabulous, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks for reading, Dolly.
Comment from Pamusart
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Who is Jane? Is she a poet? Some notes would be super helpful for this reader. This is my favorite part.

"Saw ghosts in the air
And painted them with ink"

Then wouldn't they no longer be invisible? Hehe

Would cause less message if we can see them. We might faint.

Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Jane Austen. She was a famous British novelist. I thought the picture was enough... , but I've added some notes now.
    Thanks for reading.
reply by Pamusart on 15-Apr-2018
    I thought it might be she. But, I am familiar with her as a novelist. I just was not sure
Comment from meeshu
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a nice tribute to an artist, maria. love the flow of this poem. it is even and smooth. and you've got some great verbiage here. all in all a superior effort......meeshu

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much for reading.