Comment from antonieta

Excellent

I enjoyed the little poem and even though I am not acquainted with this type of poem, reading your examples you did well - oh dear it must be frightfully difficult to write such a poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Sedokas seem to have been invented for FanStory. I am delighted you enjoyed mine about boyhood. Many thanks for sharing.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Sedoka' writing prompt.
Your verse clearly tells of young boys on the pond.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

I am delighted you think this is a good entry for the Sedoka prompt. Many thanks for sharing and your kind praise.

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Excellent picture selection with a poem that is very well written with lots and lots of imagery. You should do good in the contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

I was so fortunate to find a picture that goes so well with my poem. I am delighted you enjoyed both and appreciate the kind praise.