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Robin

A rhyming poem.

15 total reviews 
Comment from Joan E.
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What a striking picture and color presentation! I enjoyed your focusing on the little bird's "cravat" and could almost hear the robin "drum" on the table. I admired your rhymes and storytelling. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
    Thank you so much Joan for this wonderful review and comments. They are so much appreciated. You made my poem a recognized one. Thanks. Fia
reply by Joan E. on 24-Apr-2018
    I am delighted my review helped your poem receive the recognition it deserves. More cheers- Joan
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem expresses the wish of many in the Midwest, me included, who dearly wish to see a bird. This winter has been way too long. We just got 14 inches of snow. Seeing a bird would be a blessing for it would tell us that Spring is here.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much dragonpoet, for a wonderful review and comments. Winter is over here in Holland. At least I hope so. You never know......I was so glad to see the birds in my garden again... So sorry you have to wait so long. Fia
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Apr-2018
    You are so very welcome,Fia. It is what it is. I do live in Minnesota. But I am tired of snow already.

    Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a delightful poem, Fia. I love the birds, too. Watch them constantly out my atrium door while sitting at the table. They've had a rough time of it here for the past couple of days as we've had a big storm. Your poem is well composed and rhymed. Words flow nicely and presentation is gorgeous. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much Marilyn for a great review and lovely comments and the awesome six stars. The weather here is nice, almost 20 degrees so the birds show up again. I hope it stays that way. Fia
reply by BeasPeas on 16-Apr-2018
    Hi Fia. Good for you! I think it is supposed to warm up later in the week for us. It will be wonderful to actually have a springtime instead of mounds of snow. Marilyn
Comment from ameen786
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A picture perfect write so vivid in its descriptive phrases with excellent rhymes and superb flow; thanks for the treat and this would make a wonderful picture frame to hang on a wall.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much for a wonderful review and comments Ameen. They are much appreciated. Fia
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Nice work Fia! It is a thrill to get close to and interact with wildlife. It can take your breath away. Birds are special and very entertaining. Your poem has wonderful imagery and I love the picture. Very well done my friend. Enjoy the day! Nancy.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thank you so much, Nancy for this wonderful review and comments. At last the weather becomes better again... Such a joy to see and hear the birds.....Fia
Comment from sunnilicious
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Beautiful presentation with artwork choice and poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Creative. Observant. Sincerely tender. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Wow, thanks so much Alicia for a wonderful review and lovely comments and the awesome six stars. The robin is beautiful but still very afraid. You have to be careful by watching it. I hope he get used to me.... Fia
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written rhyming poem. It is a great adventure to watch the birds in the garden looking for worms and scraps to eat. We also like to help them with some seeds or bread crumbs.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks Sandra for a wonderful review and lovely comments. In Winter I always feed them but they dissapear in no time when it's cold. Now they are in the garden for a long time. Fia
Comment from robina1978
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An excellent photo of a robin, that complements your poem perfectly. It rhymes and flows all the way. He wants some bread crumbs. You put them down. I really loved the last few lines. One tip: I'd try what it looks like with orange letters instead of the red ones- I could not find much red. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much Ine for a wonderful review and the lovely six.Yes you are right, I already had my doubts about the color.
    I made the background darker and the text orange. Thanks for telling me. Fia xxx
Comment from Janilou
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I enjoyed your poem. It was a little difficult to read and I'm not sure if it was because of the font type you chose or the color or a combination of both. If other reviewers mention it you might want to consider changing it.
Otherwise it was great.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much Jan for a wonderful review and comments. Yes you are right about the color. I made the background darker and the text orange. It looks much better now. I already had my doubts. Thank you!! Fia
reply by Janilou on 15-Apr-2018
    Much better! :-) And it still matches the poem beautifully.
Comment from apky
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Yes, they are wondrous to observe, these birds. And one can feel that silent communication loud and clear.

I'll admit I'm no expert at poems. But I did enjoy reading yours tremendously, even if I can't help you with the technicalities of writing something like this.

Excellent work.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much apky for a wonderful review and comments. They are much appreciated.. Fia