The Pall
one line poem entry17 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
So much is said in so few words. I like the message that you share with your poem to the reader here. It does truly bring sadness to all. I like what you've presented here. This is an excellent entry for the contest. Well done Dragonpoet!
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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So much is said in so few words. I like the message that you share with your poem to the reader here. It does truly bring sadness to all. I like what you've presented here. This is an excellent entry for the contest. Well done Dragonpoet!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Thanks, Jeffrey, for all the positive comments and the high rating.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt one-line poem. Cancer is the illness no-one wish to make it part of their lives at all and surely bring sadness to everyone involve.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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A very well-written heartfelt one-line poem. Cancer is the illness no-one wish to make it part of their lives at all and surely bring sadness to everyone involve.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thanks for the kind review and high rating You review got this it the recognized list.
Joan
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, doesn't it though! What clever rhyming in your poem too - not an easy accomplishment.
I think the stats on cancer in Canada reveal one in three people will develop some form of it in his or her life - sad indeed!
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Oh, doesn't it though! What clever rhyming in your poem too - not an easy accomplishment.
I think the stats on cancer in Canada reveal one in three people will develop some form of it in his or her life - sad indeed!
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind comments and good
luck wishes. Those are very sad stats.
Enjoy your week.
Joan
Comment from N. Rabwar
This is a very effective and expressive one line poem. I think it is an excellent contest entry. Cancer certainly is a monster and you describe its effects very well.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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This is a very effective and expressive one line poem. I think it is an excellent contest entry. Cancer certainly is a monster and you describe its effects very well.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
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Thanks for the kind words of encouragement and all the stars.
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
What well was said in so few words which was so true. Cancer comes in so many forms and fashion and it eats away slowly as it kills. Everyone in the world has been exposed to it and some form. We've either lost someone or have it ourselves and it's not a pretty sight
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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What well was said in so few words which was so true. Cancer comes in so many forms and fashion and it eats away slowly as it kills. Everyone in the world has been exposed to it and some form. We've either lost someone or have it ourselves and it's not a pretty sight
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thanks for the kine words of encouragement.
dragonpoet
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My pleasure
Comment from karenina
Yes. True that. I have lost dear ones to cancer and battled it myself..
It is a challenge to body, mind and spirit.
God bless all whose lives have been touched by this determined foe!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Yes. True that. I have lost dear ones to cancer and battled it myself..
It is a challenge to body, mind and spirit.
God bless all whose lives have been touched by this determined foe!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Congratulations of surviving cancer. I have had several family members succumb to it
Joan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how cancer in a patient hangs temporarily like a cover for a coffin inviting sadness to the family members; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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This speaks how cancer in a patient hangs temporarily like a cover for a coffin inviting sadness to the family members; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
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Comment from Ogden
Well, nobody can disagree with that line - which quite possibly can't be said about the other contest entries.
I hope the Committee doesn't disagree with me (again, as it always does).
Good luck,
Don (Ogden)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Well, nobody can disagree with that line - which quite possibly can't be said about the other contest entries.
I hope the Committee doesn't disagree with me (again, as it always does).
Good luck,
Don (Ogden)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Thanks for such a positive review and generous rating< Don. I hope so too. I appreciate the good luck wishes.
Joan
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You're very welcome, Joan.
Don
Comment from jenintorre
My goodness, you have summed cancer up perfectly in these few words. An excellent one line poem. I wish you good luck in the competition Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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My goodness, you have summed cancer up perfectly in these few words. An excellent one line poem. I wish you good luck in the competition Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Jen, for your kind words and good luck wishes.
Joan.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Amazing when one can write a complete "story/poem" in one line. This is filled with intense emotion and it's very well written. What a great entry to the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Amazing when one can write a complete "story/poem" in one line. This is filled with intense emotion and it's very well written. What a great entry to the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks for such high praise in words and stars.
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