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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from judiverse
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Oh, yuck! Just look at the slimeball in the picture. I doubt if anyone's out there with picket signs reading "Worms' lives Matter." Your words describing the worm are well chosen. It's the slime part I hate. I won't mind if your plan ways to kill some of these worms off. judi

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    I will torture one directly.
reply by judiverse on 15-Apr-2018
    I was afraid it would come to this. I expect you to be equally harsh with the worms. judi
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Here 'tis.
Comment from lyenochka
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Hooray for the lowly worm! I am thankful for earthworms, although I think we have more than our share in the Pacific NW. Looking forward to what you will do with this creature!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from nomi338
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Willy looks like he has a slight problem near his middle. What is with the discoloration? Could old Willy be injured or is he just sick. Better roll him into Urgent Care. I fear if a hungry bird should happen upon old Willy, he might hesitate to bite him for fear he might get sick. Hey that could be Willy's escape clause. Gross out predators with his discolored middle/

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
    That is where Willy?s four hearts are located.
Comment from Cass Carlton
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Here we go again I see
With topic long and slithery
But if you chop it into half
From both ends then it will laugh.
The worm turns into two at last
A morsel makes for hen's repast.





























 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Nice!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and cute short poem about Willy worm. You used cute words and the art work fit perfectly. Believe it or not, I saw three of those kind of worms today! Very good job. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from damommy
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Worms are very beneficial to the soil. In my flower beds, I have some that look like small pythons. They would make good bait if I let anyone disturb them. My very first pet project when I was five years old was a worm farm. True!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    I will tackle the farm next then.
reply by damommy on 14-Apr-2018
    I'll be looking for it. 8-)
Comment from karenina
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Here ya go, a worm's fair game...
an ugly thing, an ugly name...
cylindrical, but such good bait...
and I don't care about HIS fate!
Pick on the worm, squish with those feet....
but leave alone the parakeet!

(YOU CRACK ME UP!)


Karenina

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Worm must worry now.
reply by karenina on 14-Apr-2018
    Meh...who cares about worms? (LOL)