We Are One
The gift we give each other49 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful love poem about the man you have been married to a very long time. That is very special to have a love like that. When I look at my husband I see love and caring too. Very good descriptive words and lovely art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This is a very beautiful love poem about the man you have been married to a very long time. That is very special to have a love like that. When I look at my husband I see love and caring too. Very good descriptive words and lovely art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Teri for this wonderful review. I always appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Artasylum
That is one very large AAAAHHHH from me. I'm so happy for you guys. What a gift to your lives. No wonder you write it so well. thanks so much for the read... yours, diana
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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That is one very large AAAAHHHH from me. I'm so happy for you guys. What a gift to your lives. No wonder you write it so well. thanks so much for the read... yours, diana
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Diana for this wonderful review. I always appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Swampfox1
This is an excellent entry into the contest. I like the wording , I love the layout and the words dance. The imagery is also excellent, especially with "Lover our centerpiece -- we intertwine." "You take me into your arms and rock my world" is not a phrase used too often, I haven't seen it until now with all the poems I have reviewed. Great job, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This is an excellent entry into the contest. I like the wording , I love the layout and the words dance. The imagery is also excellent, especially with "Lover our centerpiece -- we intertwine." "You take me into your arms and rock my world" is not a phrase used too often, I haven't seen it until now with all the poems I have reviewed. Great job, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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you're welcome
Comment from Tootie
This is so beautiful. How wonderful your husband still rocks your world! I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very well written and expressed. Love the presentation too. Good luck in the contest. Blessings!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This is so beautiful. How wonderful your husband still rocks your world! I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very well written and expressed. Love the presentation too. Good luck in the contest. Blessings!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Tootie for this wonderful review. I appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
Marriages can work so wonderfully well, when we heed the voice and promoting of God, and by faith appropriate that which God has given, the covenant is a Holy thing, and if agreed and embraced by both parties works so beautifully. Well done Janet, written in your immaculate rhyming quatrains in tetrametric aabb verse, good luck in the concert, blessings, Roy
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Marriages can work so wonderfully well, when we heed the voice and promoting of God, and by faith appropriate that which God has given, the covenant is a Holy thing, and if agreed and embraced by both parties works so beautifully. Well done Janet, written in your immaculate rhyming quatrains in tetrametric aabb verse, good luck in the concert, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Roy for this wonderful review and those special six stars. I always appreciate your encouraging comments.
Blessings
Janet
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Well earned Carol
Comment from karenina
Well isn't that a fortuitous situation? It'd be a shame to be together all those years and be bored to death of him in the romance department, no wouldn't it? I think TRUE love finds a way to keep romance alive....
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Well isn't that a fortuitous situation? It'd be a shame to be together all those years and be bored to death of him in the romance department, no wouldn't it? I think TRUE love finds a way to keep romance alive....
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Karenina for this wonderful review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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?Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until another heart whispers back. Those who wish to sing always find a song. At the touch of a lover, everyone becomes a poet.?
― Plato
Comment from Harry Smith
I really like the softness of your presentation. The picture really complimented the poem that is outstandingly well written with lots and lots of imagery. The reader enjoyed.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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I really like the softness of your presentation. The picture really complimented the poem that is outstandingly well written with lots and lots of imagery. The reader enjoyed.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Harry for this wonderful review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Liberty Justice
"Your gentle touch ignites my very soul is very metaphoric and personifies soneone's touch. Testifies to love of this loved person. Indeed very sensual romantic. WELL DONE. Liberty justice
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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"Your gentle touch ignites my very soul is very metaphoric and personifies soneone's touch. Testifies to love of this loved person. Indeed very sensual romantic. WELL DONE. Liberty justice
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Liberty Justice or this wonderful review and extra special rating. I always appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gloria ....
A most enjoyable weaving of the physical world of nature with the love shared between a husband and wife.
Your lean vivid images put in motion the direction to the gift that is shared between two.
Excellent form and a beautiful poem, Janet.
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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A most enjoyable weaving of the physical world of nature with the love shared between a husband and wife.
Your lean vivid images put in motion the direction to the gift that is shared between two.
Excellent form and a beautiful poem, Janet.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Gloria for this wonderful review. I always appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a concise and romantic love poem with unforced abcb rhyme. It alludes both emotional and physical love.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This is a concise and romantic love poem with unforced abcb rhyme. It alludes both emotional and physical love.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you dragonpoet for this wonderful review. I always appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
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My pleasure, Janet.
Joan
