Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Really nicely put together, smooth flowing tribute to the Holy Spirit in his month. Great form to use for this one, turned out perfectly.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018

Dear frogbook, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I love a center aligned Nonet....it presents so beautifully on the page! Your reverent poem/prayer to our Creator is straight from your heart and I can feel that from here. Blessings to you!

Karenina

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very lovely poem you have penned. You used very good words and lovely art work. I only had one question: This confuses me - Creator of Christ
I thought that Christ Jesus was the one that said he would not leave us comfortless. That is when He sent His Holy Spirit to dwell with us. This made me think you were saying that the Holy Spirit created Christ when you said creator of Christ. Maybe sent by Christ would be more like it - just an idea!

love, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018

Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. By "creator of Christ," I meant that the Spirit formed Christ in the Virgin's womb, He overshadowed her and Christ was created by their love in Her womb. Love, Donna

Comment from Harold Gardner

Exceptional

Good message, has a very good flow and I think this poem meets the requirements for the contest. The photo is also very fitting intro to your poem. Good job and keep writing.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Dear Harold, Thank you for your comments and exceptional rating. Dove

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Awesome Powerful declaration to and about our lead, our guide, our teacher and comforter. He is my compadre, my friend my home'. I love Him and He has proven time and time again how much He loves me. I'm so thankful that God thought EVERYTHING we would need to live in this. Spirit filled life and made provisions as well.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Dear Mary, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 14-Apr-2018

My pleasure Dove

Comment from apky

Excellent

I'll admit I'm no expert at poems. But I did enjoy reading yours tremendously, even if I can't help you with the technicalities of writing something like this.

Excellent work.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018

Dear apky, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove