Precious Gems
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5 total reviews
Comment from schatzling
Simple and yet very poignant.
Love the words.
Love the meaning.
It is perfect.
I am honored you selected my photo to accompany your writing.
They do go so well together.
Thanks for sharing.
I must look you up when I get a moment...am so interested in this book of yours (smile)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Simple and yet very poignant.
Love the words.
Love the meaning.
It is perfect.
I am honored you selected my photo to accompany your writing.
They do go so well together.
Thanks for sharing.
I must look you up when I get a moment...am so interested in this book of yours (smile)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Dear schatzling, Thank you for your comments and review and again for the artwork. Dove
Comment from karenina
OH right! Patriot's day! No mail, no school, no banks....thanks for the reminder! Really though, shouldn't every day be patriots day? I go out of my way to thank veterans for their service. It's the least we can do!
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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OH right! Patriot's day! No mail, no school, no banks....thanks for the reminder! Really though, shouldn't every day be patriots day? I go out of my way to thank veterans for their service. It's the least we can do!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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:) Anytime!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written patriotic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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This is a very well written patriotic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Blessings to you too! Donna
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Dovemarie thank you for ever keeping me as a reader reminded of the many sacrafices that was made for this country by the sacrafices of the lives of our armed forces. Beautiful memorandum and dedication
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dovemarie thank you for ever keeping me as a reader reminded of the many sacrafices that was made for this country by the sacrafices of the lives of our armed forces. Beautiful memorandum and dedication
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Mary, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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My pleasure
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Dove
This is a great cinquain. I love the patriotic message & the awesome picture. Your blue words are too neon & can't be read without highlighting the text. I would change that color ASAP. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dove
This is a great cinquain. I love the patriotic message & the awesome picture. Your blue words are too neon & can't be read without highlighting the text. I would change that color ASAP. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your comments and review. I will go in an edit the blue words. Thanks for the suggestion. Dove
