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Comment from Artasylum
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I love the pun intended... just a heads up... it is Mara Lago you have Mar... Loved the write enjoyed your presentation and am very much looking forward to more. I always like your stuff (not a literary term). yours, diana

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

Comment from meeshu
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it is very silly and quite funny. you obviously pay attention to current events and are not a CNN eunuch. I can tell because you don't you have a sense of humor.
good luck in the contest.........meeshu

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

Comment from Alexander Vasa
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hahaaaha WHat a different take on the romance competition, best of luck with this unique entry. It read really well and breaking it up into pieces was a great strategy. It was a fun read and thanks for sharing it, Ana.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018