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Sweet Mary (I would call her that.) Homeless, I fell in love

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The homeless wander because they have no roots, this is how they like to live, no commitment, and I often think they may have something we don't have, freedom maybe, your write has sadness because you wanted to speak to Mary and then she was gone, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Hey Dolly... my mom was a paranoid schizophrenic and she had us to take care of her. Her psychosis, if alone, would have put her in Sweet Mary's place. There are many who can't manage their own lives and don't choose this lifestyle and as you said there are many that do want to be free with nothing to tether them. I agree I wish sometime I could be a gypsy. yours, di xo