Fun-Story
A true giggle experience to share21 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Yes, aren't they a great blessing from the Lord, they give of themselves so willingly, particularly when offer them what they crave, closeness, beautifully written, friend and bro. Well done, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Yes, aren't they a great blessing from the Lord, they give of themselves so willingly, particularly when offer them what they crave, closeness, beautifully written, friend and bro. Well done, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much brother Roy, for another lovely message and yes, indeed, these little creatures are certainly a powerful demonstration of God's love and a real lesson on the majesty of GRATITUDE as she keeps me saying "thank you GOD" every time I look at or touch her, as I do sincerely believe she is sent to me as a genuine GUARDIAN ANGEL. Thanks again for sharing the joy! Vance
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Most welcome dear bro,
Comment from judiverse
Your "bitsy" is a cutie. They[re such a joy to have around, even when they make demands. It doesn't hurt to offer your pet a little bribe to get it to do what you want. My cat likes to cuddle up by the computer, loves to put me in airplane mode. Well worded and very descriptive. I'm wondering why you didn't present this in a poetic form with stanzas, etc. as you have a lot of rhyme. judi
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Your "bitsy" is a cutie. They[re such a joy to have around, even when they make demands. It doesn't hurt to offer your pet a little bribe to get it to do what you want. My cat likes to cuddle up by the computer, loves to put me in airplane mode. Well worded and very descriptive. I'm wondering why you didn't present this in a poetic form with stanzas, etc. as you have a lot of rhyme. judi
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much Judiverse for another lovely and smile-creating review and stars. I loved the chance to share this lovely experience with my FS Friends and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Blessings always! Vance
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You're very welcome. Have a great weekend. judi
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For sure Judi, and thanks so much for your kind reply. Vance
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You're very welcome. My kitties say Hi to that cute dog of yours. judi
Comment from rama devi
She is adorable! What a delight.You're sweet to share her with us. This has some spag issues you might like to fix, but otherwise flows nicely. I love your pun on crap...hee hee. Say hi to Bitsy for me with a kiss on her furry face.
NOTES
Today(,) I sat with dear "b(B)itsy", my puppy love, snuggled in my lap. w(W)hen I asked her to move so I could type, she made it clear she did not give a crap! (thank heavens)!
On the last part, I suggest just one !:
she made it clear she did not give a crap (thank heavens)!
So it would read, with above changes:
Today, I sat with dear "Bitsy", my puppy love, snuggled in my lap. When I asked her to move so I could type, she made it clear she did not give a crap (thank heavens)!
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But then I remembered a yummy treat, still hiding in my pocket(,) and typically(,) when made aware, this gal moves like a little furry rocket.
Fun bonus rhyme.
* and when I pulled out the treat(,) she was already fixed to race.
* So now(,) as I tap as softly as my finger shall allow, I hope to offer some joy and smiles to my FS friends before I take my bow.
FUN BONUS RHYME IN THE CLOSING TOO.
I enjoyed the joy and smiles. Thanks for sharing!
Love and Light,
rd
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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She is adorable! What a delight.You're sweet to share her with us. This has some spag issues you might like to fix, but otherwise flows nicely. I love your pun on crap...hee hee. Say hi to Bitsy for me with a kiss on her furry face.
NOTES
Today(,) I sat with dear "b(B)itsy", my puppy love, snuggled in my lap. w(W)hen I asked her to move so I could type, she made it clear she did not give a crap! (thank heavens)!
On the last part, I suggest just one !:
she made it clear she did not give a crap (thank heavens)!
So it would read, with above changes:
Today, I sat with dear "Bitsy", my puppy love, snuggled in my lap. When I asked her to move so I could type, she made it clear she did not give a crap (thank heavens)!
*
But then I remembered a yummy treat, still hiding in my pocket(,) and typically(,) when made aware, this gal moves like a little furry rocket.
Fun bonus rhyme.
* and when I pulled out the treat(,) she was already fixed to race.
* So now(,) as I tap as softly as my finger shall allow, I hope to offer some joy and smiles to my FS friends before I take my bow.
FUN BONUS RHYME IN THE CLOSING TOO.
I enjoyed the joy and smiles. Thanks for sharing!
Love and Light,
rd
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much my dear rama, for another lovely and uplifting review. you kiss has been delivered and a lovely lick has just landed upon my cheek in return! Wow! That's what I call a "double play" so let me know whey you want to send Bitsy another one! Blessings, love, and hugs always! Vance
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Yay! Thank Bitsy for the doggie kiss back! send her another one right away! Love and Hugs,
rd
Comment from Marge Setzer
Thanks for sharing, Vance. You made me laugh. A little bribery works wonders sometimes. Thanks for sharing this tidbit about your kitty. She's a smart one. Looking forward to your next FanStory entry. Marge
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks for sharing, Vance. You made me laugh. A little bribery works wonders sometimes. Thanks for sharing this tidbit about your kitty. She's a smart one. Looking forward to your next FanStory entry. Marge
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hi Marge, and sorry if the photo did not do it's job, as Bitsy is a Teacup Yorkie Puppy and I believe her to be my very own Guardian Angel, so thanks anyway, and always a joy to hear from you Vance
Comment from artisart4u
That was a clever move, both won.
Bitsy gets the treat and you get to type.
Moments like this is so heart warming that you have to share it with someone.
In this case trusting you're making the right move.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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That was a clever move, both won.
Bitsy gets the treat and you get to type.
Moments like this is so heart warming that you have to share it with someone.
In this case trusting you're making the right move.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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WOW! thanks so much artisart4u, for this wonderful review and glorious stars! I'm so happy to know you enjoyed this and also so happy to meet you and hope to see you again soon. You have really made my day and I'm eager to see you again soon! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Zue65
Oh I love this , I love to cuddle your pet too. My daughter's dog, a brown colored Shih Tzunis gives delight in the house also, especially when it rolls on its back begging for a belly rub. Thanks for sharing your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Oh I love this , I love to cuddle your pet too. My daughter's dog, a brown colored Shih Tzunis gives delight in the house also, especially when it rolls on its back begging for a belly rub. Thanks for sharing your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks you so much nassus, for this delightful review and stars! So great to meet you and I hope to see you again soon. All the very best to you! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a fun little poem to share with FanStory. What a great photo. I have a cat that doesn't always want me to be online typing. Animals make a great topic to write about.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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What a fun little poem to share with FanStory. What a great photo. I have a cat that doesn't always want me to be online typing. Animals make a great topic to write about.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thank you Cindy, for this lovely review and stars, so very much appreciated. Isn't it funny how bright these lovely little critters are when it comes to calling themselves to attention when we wander off into boring "people" stuff while they await their tickles and rubs and hugs! And what a treat to give them what they call for! Stay tuned please and thanks again! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from karenina
IT is a difficult choice...the love and comfort of your furry friend or the need to write and thus inspire. Luckily for US you had a snack for your "baby" and that allowed you to enjoy both activities.
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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IT is a difficult choice...the love and comfort of your furry friend or the need to write and thus inspire. Luckily for US you had a snack for your "baby" and that allowed you to enjoy both activities.
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hi Karenina and thanks for this lovely review and generous stars, greatly appreciated. Yes, you are right, so I always keep a treat at hand in case I'm about to be scolded for lack of attention and due appreciation for the little angels that sit and wait for their due love and appreciation. Thanks again and please don't be a stranger. Blessing always: HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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A real "love" poem....for pets are always unconditionally our best friends!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks sharing of a fun story, the cat on the lap did not move a little to give the poet access to write his story on the laptop at ease, but it started taking a nap on poet's lap; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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This speaks sharing of a fun story, the cat on the lap did not move a little to give the poet access to write his story on the laptop at ease, but it started taking a nap on poet's lap; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much Alcreator, for this lovely review and stars. I'm delighted to know that you enjoyed this work which gave me such delight in delivering. I'm a dog., well actually, "animal" lover in almost all dimensions, so it's always a joy to have an opportunity to share any fun experiences with our furry friends. Thanks again! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Debbie Pope
Thank you for sharing your puppy love. My cat Butler, who died two years ago, used to walk on the computer keyboard. If I lured him away, he came right back. It was a cat obsession that slowed me down and gave him much joy. Now that he is gone, I realize how much joy that annoying habit gave me. Thought I would return your favor and share my kitty love.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thank you for sharing your puppy love. My cat Butler, who died two years ago, used to walk on the computer keyboard. If I lured him away, he came right back. It was a cat obsession that slowed me down and gave him much joy. Now that he is gone, I realize how much joy that annoying habit gave me. Thought I would return your favor and share my kitty love.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much Debbie, for sharing your kitty love and also this lovely review. It is truly a very precious gift to have such creatures of "unconditional" love in our lives and I'm always delighted to read as well as share any experiences with them to keep their richness shining and not forgotten. Blessings always! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
