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A Monchielle for Potlatch25 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Just wonderful!!! Sounds like my life. I did get that yard mowed today, only to come inside to dishes, and two loads of laundry! I love this form also. Very appealing!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Just wonderful!!! Sounds like my life. I did get that yard mowed today, only to come inside to dishes, and two loads of laundry! I love this form also. Very appealing!
Blessings...
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thank you. It was fun to try. You'll notice I didn't say WHEN I'd get around in the work inside. lol
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Ha ha...I got mine done...til tomorrow!
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Oh, you! Now I'll have to do some housework.
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Ha ha...sorry...I'll slack off, I'll make Sloppy Joe's and Banana Nut bread instead!!
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I'll be right over. 8-)
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hurry, hurry...or catch the pork roast, mashed potatoes and stuffing tomorrow! Smiles!!!
Comment from JennaG
I definitely know that feeling. It seems like I finally get all my outside work done and then it's time to deal with the inside again. Ugh! It's never-ending! ;) This was such a fun piece to read! Your repeating line works really well and the artwork goes along perfectly! Great work! :)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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I definitely know that feeling. It seems like I finally get all my outside work done and then it's time to deal with the inside again. Ugh! It's never-ending! ;) This was such a fun piece to read! Your repeating line works really well and the artwork goes along perfectly! Great work! :)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Jenna. I still haven't got busy inside yet. LOL. I didn't say WHEN I'd do it.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your repeated line works well in your Monchielle and slots in well with all your verses. It flows easily and your words create a picture of a day outside, before starting inside. Nicely done.
cheers
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Your repeated line works well in your Monchielle and slots in well with all your verses. It flows easily and your words create a picture of a day outside, before starting inside. Nicely done.
cheers
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2018
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Thank you. Good to hear from you.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Yvonne, My Pal -
If you have so much strength,
I wish you'd come see me.
I've lots that you can do!
Although my laundry's done,
I'll save the dust for you.
If you have so much strength,
I'm hungry and can't cook.
Potatoes need to bake;
au gratin if you please,
and then I'd like some cake.
If you have so much strength,
I need to shop for clothes.
I've put on too much weight.
My cravings cause the gain
of all the fat I hate.
If you have so much strength,
why not decide you'll come?
I'm sure that you can drive.
My housework's never done.
I hope you'll soon arrive.
:))) (Thanks for the new form!) (Did I manage it?) Hahahahaha! What FUN your poem is - what FUN it inspired!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Yvonne, My Pal -
If you have so much strength,
I wish you'd come see me.
I've lots that you can do!
Although my laundry's done,
I'll save the dust for you.
If you have so much strength,
I'm hungry and can't cook.
Potatoes need to bake;
au gratin if you please,
and then I'd like some cake.
If you have so much strength,
I need to shop for clothes.
I've put on too much weight.
My cravings cause the gain
of all the fat I hate.
If you have so much strength,
why not decide you'll come?
I'm sure that you can drive.
My housework's never done.
I hope you'll soon arrive.
:))) (Thanks for the new form!) (Did I manage it?) Hahahahaha! What FUN your poem is - what FUN it inspired!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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You did. Now, post it! That poem was purely fictional. lol. Strength, stamina, what are those things?
Be sure to post this wonderful poem you wrote.
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HAHAHA - oh no, too much else already posted, but thank you! You've made my day! (I will save it though. xxoo)
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Post it tomorrow, then. It deserves to be read.
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Really? THANKS!
Comment from sandy montgomery
I liked the repetition of your poem and enjoyed your view very much. Unfortunately it induced me to look around and see many of the same chores need doing here. So thanks for that lol. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I liked the repetition of your poem and enjoyed your view very much. Unfortunately it induced me to look around and see many of the same chores need doing here. So thanks for that lol. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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It never ends, does it!!!! I wish I could tell you I started on the inside, but I can't say that. lol
Thanks, Sandy, for reviewing.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, I loved it. What a wonderful poem with a story within. It doesn't seem to matter which new form of poetry you're writing. You always seem to master it. Wonderful!! All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hi Yvonne, I loved it. What a wonderful poem with a story within. It doesn't seem to matter which new form of poetry you're writing. You always seem to master it. Wonderful!! All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thank you for that compliment. Hope you're getting settled in nicely.
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I'm so happy in my new, home. In two weeks I'm flying to Boston to vist my brother and family. I can't wait. I'm also to visit my dad's grave. We buried him ten years ago. The last time I was there. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I really enjoyed this poem, Yvonne. I love to work in the garden, you can easily see where you've been and get a lot of pleasure doing it. I had to laugh at your last line, lol, 'it's time to start inside'!! LOL. Get to it! Well done my friend. :) Sandra.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I really enjoyed this poem, Yvonne. I love to work in the garden, you can easily see where you've been and get a lot of pleasure doing it. I had to laugh at your last line, lol, 'it's time to start inside'!! LOL. Get to it! Well done my friend. :) Sandra.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I didn't say WHEN I'd get started inside. lol. I like being outdoors, too, and will let the housework go to work in the yard. Thank you for this wonderful review.
Comment from nartoonla
HI, that was a cheerful little peace and liked it and yet what a routine to start over again out and then in. And how you take it all with a cheerful little poem and smile while at times I hide and cry as I say oh no not again, wash the dishes make my bed, how the grass doing, and who cares where is my book.. smiling at the better person . Bravo ps and or was that just a mood ha.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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HI, that was a cheerful little peace and liked it and yet what a routine to start over again out and then in. And how you take it all with a cheerful little poem and smile while at times I hide and cry as I say oh no not again, wash the dishes make my bed, how the grass doing, and who cares where is my book.. smiling at the better person . Bravo ps and or was that just a mood ha.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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You'll notice if didn't say WHEN I'd get to the inside work. lol.
I'm guilty of letting the housework go to be out in the yard. Thank you so much.
Comment from LIJ Red
I have a war going on here on the hill. My crows and jays and cardinals and threshers all hate each other. I believe you hit the Monchielle nail on the head.
I believe if you listened you could hear my grass growing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I have a war going on here on the hill. My crows and jays and cardinals and threshers all hate each other. I believe you hit the Monchielle nail on the head.
I believe if you listened you could hear my grass growing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I'd love to live where you do. The birds are all vying for food, I bet. I've discovered that crows are very timid and are scared away easily. That's surprising, I think. Thanks for reading this.
Comment from Pantygynt
I have just about given up trying to keep abreast of all those chores and write a tanka a day and, because i was intrigued with this form, I even managed to write and post one of my own. This fits the bill perfectly.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I have just about given up trying to keep abreast of all those chores and write a tanka a day and, because i was intrigued with this form, I even managed to write and post one of my own. This fits the bill perfectly.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Well, I didn't say WHEN I'd get to the inside work. I'm guilty of letting the housework go to spend time outdoors and on FS. Thanks, Jim.
