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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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OH, what a lovely tribute poem. This is so sad but also is very inspiring. I love that you include more information for readers too in the author's notes about organ donation. God Bless.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks Cindy for your wonderful review and time.
    Dr.Ricky 1024
Comment from Sherman541
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You write such beautiful tributes to your Son. I know it was a long time ago, but I am so sorry for your great loss. Life sometimes seems not fair, but God must have had a place in his house and plan for Jason. God Bless you and may he watch over you always - Sherman541

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    So true, tour words comfort me..

    Ricky.....
reply by Sherman541 on 14-Apr-2018
    I am happy for that. God Bless
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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Sorry to hear of your loss I know how it is to lose I love one someone that you used to spending time with. Someone you used to sharing Precious Moments with and then that person is gone and you seem so lost without them. I know that same feeling

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks Mary, your words comfort me...
    Ricky...
reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 14-Apr-2018
    My pleasure
Comment from Harry Smith
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I really enjoy the picture and the poem is very well written with lots of imagery and emotions. The reader really understands this poem.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks Harry for your wonderful review and time.
    Dr Ricky 1024Thanks Joyce, tour words comfort me.


    Ricky....
Comment from joycetreasures
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Ricky,
This is a beautiful poem from your heart. I could feel the emotions in my own heart through the words in this poem. A unique title, "Eye M Nothing Without U!" you came up with. To lose someone close to you is devastating. I am so sorry. Great job! The story flowed throughout this poem. Thanks for sharing a piece of your soul. Keep writing. God bless you!!

JWG

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    THANKS Joyce.
    Your words comfort me.
    Ricky...

    Thanks Aki.
    Your words comfort me.
    Ricky...
Comment from apky
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What loving pictures here, Doc. They are beautiful!

Just keep praying and keep the faith.

"You had started Your Quest with your own *Band!"
"Try to understand reviewer!"
"It was a One Time Offer!"
"No Deposit, No Return!"
"When You were there but now?"
"Now that You are gone?"
...
"There is no more music, My Muse went away?"
"Lost the best of my...
'Sunny of Day?'
"So now, I pray...

God bless you,
Aki
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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    THANKS AGAIN

    Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from karenina
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"Four Wayt To Save"--what a great name for a band! SO many losses, so many lost opportunities. Of course you dwell on them...what father would not mourn the days he will never heave this side of heaven? Your pain is palpable.

Karenina

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks forever and ever Karenina.
    Ricky....
reply by karenina on 14-Apr-2018
    He is so lucky to have you, dad...

    You keep him alive for all of us to know and love.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    Thanks dear and 'Jason's Ladder 2903' next.
    Ricky...
reply by karenina on 14-Apr-2018
    Looking forward to your work...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks poetic thoughts, poet thinks of the lost song and music of his beloved song died eighteen years ago; today he is nothing but him as bereaved father thinks; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
    THANKS AGAIN FOR THE GREAT REVIEW AND HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALCREATOR.
    Dr. Ricky 1024.