Precious Gems
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Sensory"Na-po-wri-mo
10 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I love that your inspiration came from a picture in a psychiatric hospital. It describes the emotions of life perfectly. The storms come, but they do pass and leave some chance for hope. Well written.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I love that your inspiration came from a picture in a psychiatric hospital. It describes the emotions of life perfectly. The storms come, but they do pass and leave some chance for hope. Well written.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Dear Cindy, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
What a lovely poem. Life is so very much like this...powerful and full of beauty, footprints of a stranger who may or not become a friend, peace and yet a chance of tumult...stormy weather settling in... Still we keep going, garnering strength and
regaining balance...
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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What a lovely poem. Life is so very much like this...powerful and full of beauty, footprints of a stranger who may or not become a friend, peace and yet a chance of tumult...stormy weather settling in... Still we keep going, garnering strength and
regaining balance...
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Air Spirit
I love this poem because your words paint a picture. The meaning and words in your poem were Amplified by the imagery in the poem ..".. pull of the, choppy grass blows in the Wind, Rumble of Thunder mixed with switching..." all of this poetic verbiage helps me to experience the words on a deeper and more personal level. I am definitely able to relate to it because I suffer from depression but like you - the pain is a great motivator for me.. I find some of my best poetry comes from when I'm in the height of my pain. It inspires me to try to paint and give substance to my emotions and feelings. . Thank you for sharing a portion of your journey and for exposing your vulnerability.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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I love this poem because your words paint a picture. The meaning and words in your poem were Amplified by the imagery in the poem ..".. pull of the, choppy grass blows in the Wind, Rumble of Thunder mixed with switching..." all of this poetic verbiage helps me to experience the words on a deeper and more personal level. I am definitely able to relate to it because I suffer from depression but like you - the pain is a great motivator for me.. I find some of my best poetry comes from when I'm in the height of my pain. It inspires me to try to paint and give substance to my emotions and feelings. . Thank you for sharing a portion of your journey and for exposing your vulnerability.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Air Spirit, Thank you for all of your comments and your review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the beauty and the power of the ocean and its endless movement. We have to go through storms and rough times to sculpt our character to near perfection.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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A very well-written poem about the beauty and the power of the ocean and its endless movement. We have to go through storms and rough times to sculpt our character to near perfection.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a nightmare storm and you are in the middle of it, you poor thing, a very descriptive write and a difficult time, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This sounds like a nightmare storm and you are in the middle of it, you poor thing, a very descriptive write and a difficult time, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Nice piece of work .great imagery that draws you into the poem and makes you feel part of what's going on like being on the inside looking out instead just being a reader. Good job
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Nice piece of work .great imagery that draws you into the poem and makes you feel part of what's going on like being on the inside looking out instead just being a reader. Good job
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Blue Hendrix, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from apky
This poem is just as beautifully written as the one I just read from you. I'm no poet, so I can't help you with the mechanics. All I can do is tell you how your poem makes me feel or think.
Evening settles, low rumble of thunder mixed with swishing waves
This is how I perceive my life...
With storms passing, who knows what the morrow will bring?
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This poem is just as beautifully written as the one I just read from you. I'm no poet, so I can't help you with the mechanics. All I can do is tell you how your poem makes me feel or think.
Evening settles, low rumble of thunder mixed with swishing waves
This is how I perceive my life...
With storms passing, who knows what the morrow will bring?
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear apky, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks living in the present, hoping for the future, fighting and struggling for the present for a hopeful future for after the night day comes; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This speaks living in the present, hoping for the future, fighting and struggling for the present for a hopeful future for after the night day comes; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Alcreator Litt Dear, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Artasylum
Hey DoveyMarie.... The artwork is striking... as are your words... there is movement in each phrase. Looking forward to reading more from you. thanks for the read. yours, diana
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Hey DoveyMarie.... The artwork is striking... as are your words... there is movement in each phrase. Looking forward to reading more from you. thanks for the read. yours, diana
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Diana, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's how life is sometimes, unpredictable. You've done a great job describing, informing, and bringing to life this point in your poem. You've done a beautiful job with this. Well done Dove!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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That's how life is sometimes, unpredictable. You've done a great job describing, informing, and bringing to life this point in your poem. You've done a beautiful job with this. Well done Dove!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
