Dreamer
Alliteration ~ D ~5 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Disturbingly dense with "d's", despite its intent to please. (*grin*)
I had to write one with "p's", and I damn near dropped to my knees!
(You've done a remarkable job, you! LOL) (I really DID enter a prompt once, long ago, calling for the same letter to start each word. It was fun to write. :))))) They're NOT so much fun to read, though! Hahahahaha!)
Well done - good luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Disturbingly dense with "d's", despite its intent to please. (*grin*)
I had to write one with "p's", and I damn near dropped to my knees!
(You've done a remarkable job, you! LOL) (I really DID enter a prompt once, long ago, calling for the same letter to start each word. It was fun to write. :))))) They're NOT so much fun to read, though! Hahahahaha!)
Well done - good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thanks Dawn. The competition is over and I did not place. I thought I would dip my toe and try. Oh well, it was fun. ~DD
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Now this is a very challenging task of poem but you followed through and you went from deserts to donkeys, dogs, daffodils. Well dreamer great job at following the contest request. Best wishes on the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Now this is a very challenging task of poem but you followed through and you went from deserts to donkeys, dogs, daffodils. Well dreamer great job at following the contest request. Best wishes on the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much Mary. I truly appreciate your kind review.
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My pleasure
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My pleasure
Comment from BeasPeas
A fabulous alliteration poem. Love it all, but especially:
"Day's disinteresting duties done, daylight descends.
Dimming down drags darkness.
Dozing, disjointed differently deep dreams develop..."
and your clever synopsis of dreams, especially this one:
"dementedly demeaning dumbfounded dude~dumped!"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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A fabulous alliteration poem. Love it all, but especially:
"Day's disinteresting duties done, daylight descends.
Dimming down drags darkness.
Dozing, disjointed differently deep dreams develop..."
and your clever synopsis of dreams, especially this one:
"dementedly demeaning dumbfounded dude~dumped!"
Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thank you Marilyn. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Air Spirit
Excellent! I can only imagine how much time that took you to write that poem. I know first-hand that is not easy to do well at least for me it's not easy. You on the other hand make it look like you've been doing this for a long time. A delightful share.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Excellent! I can only imagine how much time that took you to write that poem. I know first-hand that is not easy to do well at least for me it's not easy. You on the other hand make it look like you've been doing this for a long time. A delightful share.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much Air Spirit for your very thoughtful review on my alliteration poem and for the sparkling six stars. I am very grateful. I enjoyed writing the poem. Thinking in alliteration can be easier than getting a rhyme right, I feel, so this was fun to do. Blessings to you : -)
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry for the contest. I am not much into alliteration, but you did a good job with your dees. Very entertaining read. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry for the contest. I am not much into alliteration, but you did a good job with your dees. Very entertaining read. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Pamusart, thank you for taking the time to review my poem. It is much appreciated.
