Haiku and Senryu Suites
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Two More? Oh!"Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites
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Comment from irishauthorme
Missed this somehow way back but-
No one knows how fast the days, weeks, months and years go by better than the old, and I am a Prime Example!
Will be 84 this coming June 2020, and I can look back on decades of win/lose.
And, funny but not "Ha ha," I see so many old people who have denied their Creator all their lives, flocking to church in a last-ditch attempt to save their souls. So how do they figure, in a couple of years, to make up for all that time?
Also true, most people are more productive as they age and gain experience but they seldom follow Mathew 6:19;
"Lay not up for yourselves treasure upon earth, where moth and rust doth corrupt, and where thieves break through and steal,But lay up for yourself, treasures in Heaven, where neither moth nor rust doth corrupt, and thieves do not break through and steal;
For where your treasure is, there will be yopur heart also."
irish
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Missed this somehow way back but-
No one knows how fast the days, weeks, months and years go by better than the old, and I am a Prime Example!
Will be 84 this coming June 2020, and I can look back on decades of win/lose.
And, funny but not "Ha ha," I see so many old people who have denied their Creator all their lives, flocking to church in a last-ditch attempt to save their souls. So how do they figure, in a couple of years, to make up for all that time?
Also true, most people are more productive as they age and gain experience but they seldom follow Mathew 6:19;
"Lay not up for yourselves treasure upon earth, where moth and rust doth corrupt, and where thieves break through and steal,But lay up for yourself, treasures in Heaven, where neither moth nor rust doth corrupt, and thieves do not break through and steal;
For where your treasure is, there will be yopur heart also."
irish
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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hey Irish, by saying that you are a prime example I enjoy the fact that you have lived this long doing all that you have done and not become jaded eyes are on the condition of mankind or of your own connection to it reality, and you're karass. keep in mind that there are many more chapters in this book that you have not read yet. I appreciate your reviews, there and lightning can you help me see more behind the name and what I wrote then I realized; as the poem autumns gold goes over in my mind I realized it was my subconscious mind communicating with me about a deep metaphor.
BB
Comment from Earl Corp
That is the first time I've ever heard that men are known by the fruits they bear. I like the message your poem is conveying, life is short and we need to live it as righteous as possible. Very nice job Brother Badger.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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That is the first time I've ever heard that men are known by the fruits they bear. I like the message your poem is conveying, life is short and we need to live it as righteous as possible. Very nice job Brother Badger.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Always a pleasure to meet New Riders here girl thanks for your comments I look forward to collaborating in the future.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful free verse offering of hope and a bright tomorrow... and how to make it so!! ;) ;) Great work on the jewelry by the way....I can already tell you have much more patience than I!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing your positivity! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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What a wonderful free verse offering of hope and a bright tomorrow... and how to make it so!! ;) ;) Great work on the jewelry by the way....I can already tell you have much more patience than I!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing your positivity! ;) ;)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much for your consistent generous reviews I appreciate your accuracy and help.
Blessings ,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment from lyenochka
You do beautiful work, Darren! Thank you for sharing the work of your hands and mind in these well done senryu poems. Great words of wisdom here to "plant our days" and work productively for the Lord!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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You do beautiful work, Darren! Thank you for sharing the work of your hands and mind in these well done senryu poems. Great words of wisdom here to "plant our days" and work productively for the Lord!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much yelling I've written so many that I don't remember writing some of them. I think the inspiration came from the Holy Spirit at times because they write themselves I'm here to use fancy words and a thesaurus.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent haiku suite that teaches the reader. Your theme of being productive is clear and has an impact. Love the pic of the jewelry you created, it fits your poem. This poem should be on a plaque to hang up so people could read it again and again.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Excellent haiku suite that teaches the reader. Your theme of being productive is clear and has an impact. Love the pic of the jewelry you created, it fits your poem. This poem should be on a plaque to hang up so people could read it again and again.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much your comment me know have to me and I appreciate you coming by this link to read and review. You have been a great friend here, I live really appreciate you sharing your viewpoint and on my writing.
The I didn't hang it up as a flash is very appealing I'll get it done thanks !
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
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Comment from Sherman541
Very nice jewelry. I rarely wear jewelry, other than earrings when I got out they seem to dress a woman up a bit, with out all that make up stuff. Very nicely written poem. So true about keeping busy and making things and keeping productive. Sherman541
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Very nice jewelry. I rarely wear jewelry, other than earrings when I got out they seem to dress a woman up a bit, with out all that make up stuff. Very nicely written poem. So true about keeping busy and making things and keeping productive. Sherman541
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for your great review and wonderful comment, a pleasure and an honor to write with you here. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work, and give your insightful feedback.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
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You are most welcome and yes very nice to write and have people to read things too. Blessing also to you ;)
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a well-written poem. It has a nice flow and your great word choice brings us a powerful message. Your right no one is promised tomorrow so we should make every day count. Beautiful Jewelry.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This is a well-written poem. It has a nice flow and your great word choice brings us a powerful message. Your right no one is promised tomorrow so we should make every day count. Beautiful Jewelry.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for your great review and wonderful comment, a pleasure and an honor to write with you here. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work, and give your insightful feedback.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
