Uncaged thoughts
a contest entry11 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I have fallen behind, but I am glad I did not miss this thought-provoking 5-7-5. I liked the analogy of the singing "rhymes". Here's to more "uncaged" thoughts! Best wishes in the competition and have a productive week- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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I have fallen behind, but I am glad I did not miss this thought-provoking 5-7-5. I liked the analogy of the singing "rhymes". Here's to more "uncaged" thoughts! Best wishes in the competition and have a productive week- Joan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Hi Joan, I appreciate your time and am grateful for the wonderful review; thank you my friend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about birds, Uncaged Thoughts, has the proper set up and compares the freedom and beauty of the birds to the thoughts and words that an author sets before the world.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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This 5-7-5 about birds, Uncaged Thoughts, has the proper set up and compares the freedom and beauty of the birds to the thoughts and words that an author sets before the world.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hello Bill, I thank you for your visit and the thoughtful review; have a great weekend.
Comment from angel123
Uncaged thoughts is an interesting, well-written, meaningful poem and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with a great message contrasting between birds and thoughts taking flight. Birds soar and thoughts take flight in the mind.
angel123
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Uncaged thoughts is an interesting, well-written, meaningful poem and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with a great message contrasting between birds and thoughts taking flight. Birds soar and thoughts take flight in the mind.
angel123
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Hello Angel and thank you very much for the wonderful/thoughtful review and the generous stars; I am glad that you enjoyed the write, thank you.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :)
Your entry meets the criteria for the writing prompt.
- 5-7-5 syllable count
- about a bird / birds
I like this very much. Your presentation is also nice, but the words (for me) are perfect standing alone. Very well done and good luck in the voting booth.
Regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Hi :)
Your entry meets the criteria for the writing prompt.
- 5-7-5 syllable count
- about a bird / birds
I like this very much. Your presentation is also nice, but the words (for me) are perfect standing alone. Very well done and good luck in the voting booth.
Regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Hello Debra, I am very happy that you like the poem; i appreciate your visit and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from kleck140
Well said in your poetry. Thanks you for sharing.
Your message means a lot and please keep on
writing. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the message. EL
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Well said in your poetry. Thanks you for sharing.
Your message means a lot and please keep on
writing. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the message. EL
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello Kleck, I appreciate your visit and am pleased to read your wonderful comments; thank you very much.
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You are most welcome. Keep on! Keeping On!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of thoughts and birds singing when uncaged.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of thoughts and birds singing when uncaged.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello Sharon, glad you like the write; I thank you my friend.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, good entry for the bye bye blackbird competition, your imagery really works and I love the quote. Big fan of the Persian poets, somehow they manage to capture emotion and passion in a way that formalist Western poets don't, or rarely. They are 'uncaged' as you say. I love Hafiz especially. I noticed no errors and best of luck, Ana.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello, good entry for the bye bye blackbird competition, your imagery really works and I love the quote. Big fan of the Persian poets, somehow they manage to capture emotion and passion in a way that formalist Western poets don't, or rarely. They are 'uncaged' as you say. I love Hafiz especially. I noticed no errors and best of luck, Ana.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello Ana, so good to read your wonderful comments; I thank you for your time and the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the feeling and emotional excitement about uncaged thoughts that fly like blackbird singing in rhymes and rhythms of song indifferently or innocently being uncared about its song listened by anyone or not; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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This speaks the feeling and emotional excitement about uncaged thoughts that fly like blackbird singing in rhymes and rhythms of song indifferently or innocently being uncared about its song listened by anyone or not; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello my friend, I am glad you stopped by and thank you very much for your kind/wonderful review.
Comment from Jo-Anne Hemming
Well said. I like the quote and art you chose as well. Without the tethers of judgements and consequences we are free to express our thoughts--thanks for sharing yours.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Well said. I like the quote and art you chose as well. Without the tethers of judgements and consequences we are free to express our thoughts--thanks for sharing yours.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello Jo-Anne, I am glad that you like the write; appreciate your time and the insights; thank you very much.
Comment from zanya
What an interesting juxtaposition of our thoughts and our feathered friends here in this 5/7/5 Bye bye Blackbird - both capable , metaphorically, of transporting us to other interesting dimensions
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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What an interesting juxtaposition of our thoughts and our feathered friends here in this 5/7/5 Bye bye Blackbird - both capable , metaphorically, of transporting us to other interesting dimensions
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello zanya, I appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the poem, thank you very much.
