One Grandma's Joy
the joys of grandparenthood13 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Love the pic of you and your grandchildren. There is a feeling of joy and fun in your words. Your love and the fun you have with your grandchildren comes through clearly in your words.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Love the pic of you and your grandchildren. There is a feeling of joy and fun in your words. Your love and the fun you have with your grandchildren comes through clearly in your words.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Elaine for a lovely review.
Connie
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hi, Connie
Thank you for sharing this heart-warming poem dedicated to your grandchildren, Jack and Madeline. Your trade-mark poetic style nicely describes a day spent in their company and the joy it brings to all of you.
:) Bev
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Hi, Connie
Thank you for sharing this heart-warming poem dedicated to your grandchildren, Jack and Madeline. Your trade-mark poetic style nicely describes a day spent in their company and the joy it brings to all of you.
:) Bev
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you, my dear friend, for such a lovely review.
Connie
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You're welcome, Connie.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your well rhymed verse is well written and has a lovely story.
I have seven grandchildren myself, and they make life worth living, to be sure.
A lovely picture as well.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Your well rhymed verse is well written and has a lovely story.
I have seven grandchildren myself, and they make life worth living, to be sure.
A lovely picture as well.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Sharon, for such a thoughtful review. I agree that, yes, grandchildren make life worth living.
Connie
Comment from robyn corum
Connie,
I'm going through the same things myself right now. It's been one of the most delicious parts of my life! *smile* I think your poems describes it really well. Thanks!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Connie,
I'm going through the same things myself right now. It's been one of the most delicious parts of my life! *smile* I think your poems describes it really well. Thanks!!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Robyn, for your encouraging review. Isn't being a grandma the most rewarding thing ever?
Connie
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It is wonderful, I remember. I had that for a very brief period. Then we moved up north and that was it. When they came up here they were much older and almost strangers, but I did get a period with then in their grade school years. Now I have two of my teenage great grandchildren next door and I see them every day. I love then dearly. LOL Grandchildren are special! Love the picture. Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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It is wonderful, I remember. I had that for a very brief period. Then we moved up north and that was it. When they came up here they were much older and almost strangers, but I did get a period with then in their grade school years. Now I have two of my teenage great grandchildren next door and I see them every day. I love then dearly. LOL Grandchildren are special! Love the picture. Nancy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Nancy, for your wonderful feedback and the six-star review. You are so lucky to have your great grandchildren living right next door. Madeline and Jack are about five minutes away by car, and I'd see them everyday if their parents would let me. I have to share with the other grandparents. )-:
Thanks again, sweet lady.
Hugs,
Connie
Comment from Debra White
Ah this is beautiful, Connie :)
Lovely meter and rhyme as always and a delightful subject.
I love the photo... you sure have your hands full with those two bundles of joy and mischief!
Best wishes, Debra x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Ah this is beautiful, Connie :)
Lovely meter and rhyme as always and a delightful subject.
I love the photo... you sure have your hands full with those two bundles of joy and mischief!
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Debra, for a great review.
Connie
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely composed, Connie. The picture is precious. I'm glad to get a chance to see both of them. Good rhyming within your piece and I think grandma is also ready for a nap. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This is very nicely composed, Connie. The picture is precious. I'm glad to get a chance to see both of them. Good rhyming within your piece and I think grandma is also ready for a nap. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Marilyn, for your most delightful review.
Connie
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is so sweet. I hope you are creating a memory/scrapbook for the grandkids--Jack and Madeline! Your writings are priceless and precious treasures for them. What a blessing to love and be loved! Thank you for sharing your story. I loved the details of all the fun you have playing. I give you a virtual six stars.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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This is so sweet. I hope you are creating a memory/scrapbook for the grandkids--Jack and Madeline! Your writings are priceless and precious treasures for them. What a blessing to love and be loved! Thank you for sharing your story. I loved the details of all the fun you have playing. I give you a virtual six stars.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Cindy, for a lovely review and for the virtual six stars. Yes, my husband and I have created books for each year of Jack's first three years and are currently working on one for Madeline's first birthday. They include both photographs that my husband has taken along with poems that I have written about them. Who knows--perhaps one day one of them will be a poet or a photographer!
Thanks again.
Connie
Comment from RodG
I can easily relate to Grandma in this poem trying to stay up with her grandchildren who are full of energy. I also write poems to and about my granddaughter and am impressed with your easy cadence and use of ABCB rhyming.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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I can easily relate to Grandma in this poem trying to stay up with her grandchildren who are full of energy. I also write poems to and about my granddaughter and am impressed with your easy cadence and use of ABCB rhyming.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Rod, for your most thoughtful review. Sounds like you can relate to poetry that addresses the joys
of being a grandparent.
Connie
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Connie, this poem is such a loving one, and you are blessed to have two lovely grandchildren. I enjoyed your writing and saw no errors. It flowed well and is a poem I would recommend to others for review, Ana.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello Connie, this poem is such a loving one, and you are blessed to have two lovely grandchildren. I enjoyed your writing and saw no errors. It flowed well and is a poem I would recommend to others for review, Ana.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Ana, for a lovely review.
Connie
