Nevermore!
My name is Johnson... even though I'm the victor here...56 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
As much as I hate to think the blackbirds/ravens are here no more--your 5-7-5 is clever and enjoyable to read. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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As much as I hate to think the blackbirds/ravens are here no more--your 5-7-5 is clever and enjoyable to read. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hey Beas... I made it out alive... thanks di
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an interesting entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Birds no more for sure.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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I think this is an interesting entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Birds no more for sure.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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thanks so much for your well wishes Sharon...yours, di
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the blackbirds knocking at the chamber from saving them from being shot by a hunter they will be no more.
Typo
nocking(knocking) at my chamber door
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the blackbirds knocking at the chamber from saving them from being shot by a hunter they will be no more.
Typo
nocking(knocking) at my chamber door
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Sandra thank you, thank you my fingers went wrote did i say thank you. di
Comment from Henry King
Excellent play on words and historic poems. Some people look on birds of the crow family as camp robbers and scavengers of death, others believe they are defenders of the homeland. The words are well done. But, I had to look very hard to find the poem. The black frame hides the small grey words. Recommend the poet change the colors.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Excellent play on words and historic poems. Some people look on birds of the crow family as camp robbers and scavengers of death, others believe they are defenders of the homeland. The words are well done. But, I had to look very hard to find the poem. The black frame hides the small grey words. Recommend the poet change the colors.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for your sage advice i took it and change it the black on white... thanks again, di
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You are welcome.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Knocking at my chamber door...otherwise this is wonderful, clever and a strong contender for a winning place in the competition. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Knocking at my chamber door...otherwise this is wonderful, clever and a strong contender for a winning place in the competition. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hey you saved me sweetie...i fixed immediately
Comment from karenina
Edgar would be SO UPSET! Watch out! He has Tell Tale Hearts and Pits and Pendulums....one might regret making a raven "no more".... one night even have a "Dark and Dreary" night! Good going!
Karenina
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Edgar would be SO UPSET! Watch out! He has Tell Tale Hearts and Pits and Pendulums....one might regret making a raven "no more".... one night even have a "Dark and Dreary" night! Good going!
Karenina
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Edgar better run... a new Writer is in town and i'm gonna take him down. yours, di
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Ah, he was a fall down drunk most of the time, I'm sure you could evade his blurry grasp!
