Nevermore!
My name is Johnson... even though I'm the victor here...56 total reviews
Comment from Alexander Vasa
haahahah Love it!! Get the gun... I enjoyed your entry for the 'bye'bye blackbird' competition. It's different. Nice word choices and picture, and you don't muck around, just bye bye blackbirds, indeed, so funny!!! Ana.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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haahahah Love it!! Get the gun... I enjoyed your entry for the 'bye'bye blackbird' competition. It's different. Nice word choices and picture, and you don't muck around, just bye bye blackbirds, indeed, so funny!!! Ana.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Hey Anastasia... i wanted it to be different... i'm trying to get a feel the audience here. Every poem i read of yours is pitch perfect. That said, the group feels conservative. The reactions just for make me smile.. That being said... I will stir up the mix... just for fun. thanks, di
Comment from Harry Smith
This is an exceptionally well written poem with lots and lots of imagery and emotions and the picture selection really complimented the poem. This is a very good entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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This is an exceptionally well written poem with lots and lots of imagery and emotions and the picture selection really complimented the poem. This is a very good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you ever so much Harry
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is a really good response to the 5-7-5 bye-bye blackbird writing prompt. Very compelling words and photo you've chosen. This is a great entry for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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This is a really good response to the 5-7-5 bye-bye blackbird writing prompt. Very compelling words and photo you've chosen. This is a great entry for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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espresso and I'm ready to go... thanks
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, what a neat photographic catch, eh? And you've worked it in with great aplomb and killed two birds with one stone, so to speak. An excellent epitaph and also bye, bye blackbird.
Best wishes to you in the contest with this delight.
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Ha, what a neat photographic catch, eh? And you've worked it in with great aplomb and killed two birds with one stone, so to speak. An excellent epitaph and also bye, bye blackbird.
Best wishes to you in the contest with this delight.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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You Got me... it was a laugh outlaid moment... the wink in that is the name on the stone is my last name... eeecccchhh. Your funny.
Comment from K.E. Edwards
Funny! This definitely fits the theme of the prompt! The image is perfect for this. This makes me think of the birds that keep rebuilding their nest right outside of my front door, instead of moving the nest somewhere else, they just attack me when I step out the door.
Good luck in the contest,
Karen
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Funny! This definitely fits the theme of the prompt! The image is perfect for this. This makes me think of the birds that keep rebuilding their nest right outside of my front door, instead of moving the nest somewhere else, they just attack me when I step out the door.
Good luck in the contest,
Karen
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Well you read what my solution was... Seriously Just Kidding... I loved those birds... You need to get a hungry cat. yours, di
Comment from meeshu
cute and violent at the same time. adherence to the 5-7-5 format.
this is a valid entry for the prompt contest. with such an iconic title
you cannot go wrong.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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cute and violent at the same time. adherence to the 5-7-5 format.
this is a valid entry for the prompt contest. with such an iconic title
you cannot go wrong.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Its an Edgar Allen Poe reference... thanks meeshu... THE RAVEN very scary...
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I know, my fav. word by a fav. poet.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
That's one way to get rid of them. A friend and I were sitting on my lanai watching the birds at the feeder. I refilled it with what I thought was a bag of seed. My wife had bought seed and lawn fertilizer at the same time. The dead birds let me know which one I had put in the feeder.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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That's one way to get rid of them. A friend and I were sitting on my lanai watching the birds at the feeder. I refilled it with what I thought was a bag of seed. My wife had bought seed and lawn fertilizer at the same time. The dead birds let me know which one I had put in the feeder.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Oh No... did your wife kill you and cry for the rest of the night Thomas... it made me cry and I didn't have to see all of this plump little lifeless body all over my lani...
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's just a little bit funny. I don't care who you are, it just is! I like the way it sounds a little like Poe, then, you make it yours. You've done a fabulous job with the artwork and how well this is written. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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That's just a little bit funny. I don't care who you are, it just is! I like the way it sounds a little like Poe, then, you make it yours. You've done a fabulous job with the artwork and how well this is written. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hey Jefferey... loved killing this sky raven and would do it again...yours, di
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Nevermore, has the right syllables and promotes gun use at the cemetery. Use a shotgun and aim high. Nice Poe reference.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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This 5-7-5, Nevermore, has the right syllables and promotes gun use at the cemetery. Use a shotgun and aim high. Nice Poe reference.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your stellar review Bill Schott
Comment from Roxanne Barbour
Excellent choice of photo. Struck me as humorous.
I enjoyed the image of the birds depicted in the poem.
My only comment is that I found the last line slightly awkward -- don't ask me why. :)
Thanks for sharing.
Roxanne
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Excellent choice of photo. Struck me as humorous.
I enjoyed the image of the birds depicted in the poem.
My only comment is that I found the last line slightly awkward -- don't ask me why. :)
Thanks for sharing.
Roxanne
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Thanks for letting me know that i'm off to take a second look. yours, di
