Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

Another one of yours that makes me smile. Or maybe I just really like birds? Who Knows? I love the image as it is very peculiar

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks, Michael

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hi Bill, the picture made me laugh, so incongruous, and the poem matched it perfectly, I'm totally confused now, the only sane one was the parakeet, the other two fish were as crazy as a pirate's parrot. LOL I liked this one a lot, Ana.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks, Ana

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

lol, This is delightful and a quite hilarious 5-7-5 poem, Bill. Gotta laugh. Nicely done. I haven't been on for awhile, gosh, I missed it here. Nice to see you again, or read you, lol. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thank you, Kerry. Welcome back.

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks, Bill:)

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Is that a perch pitching? If so this rustic e as funny as I thought! I hope the darn bird Ian' t flapping around inan aquArium some w here! Too cute...
Karenina

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018

Thanks, karenina

reply by karenina on 11-Apr-2018

Sure thing....

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Well Bill I will say this, you do have a vivid imagination and that's good you did meet the requirements for the 5-7-5
And we made it very interesting with the few words that you were allowed to use. Overall I gave you the five because it's just interesting to me some of the things you put together which comprises your Parakeet World.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018

Thanks, Mary

reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 10-Apr-2018

My pleasure

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

like your alliteration. There's a sense of Dr. Seuss in this poem. I prefer to read poetry aloud, it is the only way to read it. I enjoyed yours. It could be a child's little song. I like the cadence of this. At first it doesn't seem to make sense, but when the reader is taken in with the little song, they will become a believer. the only place for the fish would be in a birdcage. Well written.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018

Thanks, Liz

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very cute and well worded 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very cute words and very good imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018

Thanks, Teri