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Truth's tale

Poem 5/7/5

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Comment from karenina
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Oh your clever news shortly addressing g fake news !
What's the truth wi t him the lie
Could we see it if we try?
Pundits whine and yak yak yak
I want Walter Cronkite back!

Karenina

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

Comment from lyenochka
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Well said! So much for what passes for "truth" and "fact" have been so altered by special interests in the media that it's almost unrecognizable. Who is brave enough to set Truth free?

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from Artasylum
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This is an excellent write for your 5/7/5 contest, great read... love the artwork and font... The media scrum is it it for the very long confusion ride. Good Job. thanks so much yours, diana

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from Fabiha_N
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This is a well-written 5-7-5 poem! I like the picture you chose to display, it matches perfectly with the words that are conveyed. The message is clearly said and true with the last line saying "media scrum". The actual truth is always being hidden under lies. Great work :)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your message and your "hostage" analogy. Such a weighty subject and so well articulated in this tiny form. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 competition- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells a strong truth.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello zanya
I like the idea of you using the graphic
of how the imagining glass can see what there are at times the lies hidden what we believe it's the Truth
Best to you in the 5-7-5 contest.
Gert

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from humpwhistle
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I believe you're right, zanya. The truth lies in the looking for it.
If we only believe what we're told, we let others interpret for us.
We need to seek our own truths; come to our own conclusions.

Best of luck with the voters.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from William Ross
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A good 5,7,5 on how the media only reports an twists the truth as they see it. Nicely done, good luck on this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018

Comment from Harry Smith
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Outstanding picture selection that accompanied the well written poem that I think will do real good in the contest. The reader enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018