Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, and what a cute poem for the contest. Best of luck with this entry. You have met the criteria perfectly and the picture adds to the ambiance of your lovely poem. I have no suggestions for improvement, it is great just how it is and is a work I'd recommend to others to review, Ana.

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018

Thanks Ana.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Sweet words between sister and brother, a relationship that will last a lifetime, support and love and caring, I wish you luck with the contest, I can identify with your sweet words, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018

Thanks a lot Dolly for your kind comments.