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Laura Lamarca Poetry style15 total reviews
Comment from Carol Ann Yasuhara
Super job on the Laura Lamarca style poem. I really got into the words and imagery, though. That picture is stunning. I'm ready to go to that scene in the picture. Lucky you for finding it. Thanks for sharing a beautiful poem with us.
Carol
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Super job on the Laura Lamarca style poem. I really got into the words and imagery, though. That picture is stunning. I'm ready to go to that scene in the picture. Lucky you for finding it. Thanks for sharing a beautiful poem with us.
Carol
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thank you so much for a complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from June Sargent
The natural inclination is to search for something that gives us peace and tranquility. The sound of birds chirping happily, the pitter patter of spring rain, the laughter of children, or the scenery of a newly discovered haven. Whatever it may be, hold onto it in your memory for t hose days when life is anything but peaceful! Well done.
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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The natural inclination is to search for something that gives us peace and tranquility. The sound of birds chirping happily, the pitter patter of spring rain, the laughter of children, or the scenery of a newly discovered haven. Whatever it may be, hold onto it in your memory for t hose days when life is anything but peaceful! Well done.
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Thanks, June. These days, nature is brought to the urban areas in artificial form, which does not appeal to me much. I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from victor 66
Well, this poem format seems to require a very specific criteria. You appear to have accomplished this task. Finding serenity when stress feels like it's all around you, is hard to do. But you should really try to find that peaceful place, whether it's in your head or it's an actual place. It means survival for anyone who is overwhelmed. This is a good poem with a good message. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Well, this poem format seems to require a very specific criteria. You appear to have accomplished this task. Finding serenity when stress feels like it's all around you, is hard to do. But you should really try to find that peaceful place, whether it's in your head or it's an actual place. It means survival for anyone who is overwhelmed. This is a good poem with a good message. Best wishes.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Artasylum
Hey Bucketlist,
Just reading the instructions for this poetry form made my head explode. It is seriously wrapped inside of an enigma. If this is a contest (couldn't tell) good luck. yours, dian
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Hey Bucketlist,
Just reading the instructions for this poetry form made my head explode. It is seriously wrapped inside of an enigma. If this is a contest (couldn't tell) good luck. yours, dian
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Hi Diana, no contest, just a club challenge! I seriously was challenged by this style, but feel good that I conquered it LOL
Thanks so much for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Eternal Muse
Never tried this form. Great visuals, imagery and rhyming in this poem which takes you far away on a journey of beauty.
Searching for some tranquility
Finally found it in nature's good view
Start of where the empty field lay
Bathed in the rays of sunshine's fading light
Just beautiful!
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Never tried this form. Great visuals, imagery and rhyming in this poem which takes you far away on a journey of beauty.
Searching for some tranquility
Finally found it in nature's good view
Start of where the empty field lay
Bathed in the rays of sunshine's fading light
Just beautiful!
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem invented by Laura Lamarca, I forgot the name of the form, although I did one of these myself. A sunrise and a sunset is always a great subject for any poem.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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A very well-written poem invented by Laura Lamarca, I forgot the name of the form, although I did one of these myself. A sunrise and a sunset is always a great subject for any poem.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your review - the style is really a challenge
Enjoy your Autumn days
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from meeshu
well done Bucket. that is an intriguing form, quite simple but striking when it is applied. you really have a wonderful flow with your words here.........meeshu
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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well done Bucket. that is an intriguing form, quite simple but striking when it is applied. you really have a wonderful flow with your words here.........meeshu
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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A great review, thanks meeshu
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Air Spirit
An incredibly beautiful, peaceful and inspirational poem.. I relate so easily to you having received a healing from nature.. from being outdoors.. a time when I typically can forget the insane mindset that sometimes plays and plagues me in a never ending loop in my head.. a dangerous neighborhood.. The picture is outstanding, and is a perfect match for your word, the tone, mood and sentiment of the poem.. thanks for sharing this little gem..
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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An incredibly beautiful, peaceful and inspirational poem.. I relate so easily to you having received a healing from nature.. from being outdoors.. a time when I typically can forget the insane mindset that sometimes plays and plagues me in a never ending loop in my head.. a dangerous neighborhood.. The picture is outstanding, and is a perfect match for your word, the tone, mood and sentiment of the poem.. thanks for sharing this little gem..
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Thank YOU for your wonderful appreciative review. Also, welcome to my patch of Fan Story. Writing poetry is a love of mine, especially when readers enjoy the posts. Our souls are not meant to be trapped in straight jackets, and sharing poetry loosens the straps a little.
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Thank YOU for your wonderful appreciative review. Also, welcome to my patch of Fan Story. Writing poetry is a love of mine, especially when readers enjoy the posts. Our souls are not meant to be trapped in straight jackets, and sharing poetry loosens the straps a little.
Comment from Harry Smith
Exceptionally well written is this poem that is filled with lots and lots of imagery and emotions. The picture selection is exceptional and is prefect for this picture.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Exceptionally well written is this poem that is filled with lots and lots of imagery and emotions. The picture selection is exceptional and is prefect for this picture.
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Hello ss
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Hi again, I appreciated your very kind review
Hug, Trisha
Comment from Alexander Vasa
hello Bucketlist, I enjoyed this work, which is written to strict criteria, and that's difficult. I noticed no errors, just great imagery throughout, as you speak of nature in such a beautiful way. I often find solace in the natural World, also. I have no suggestions for improvement and this is a work I would recommend to other readers for review, Ana.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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hello Bucketlist, I enjoyed this work, which is written to strict criteria, and that's difficult. I noticed no errors, just great imagery throughout, as you speak of nature in such a beautiful way. I often find solace in the natural World, also. I have no suggestions for improvement and this is a work I would recommend to other readers for review, Ana.
Comment Written 03-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Yes, it was very challenging, I?m glad you liked the final poem. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
