Seasons
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Comment from tempeste
I love that picture and a lovely poem to match .
In my country that bird is called a pettirosso ..it's a very territorial bird.
Yes at times in Italy we can still get snow in April ..
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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I love that picture and a lovely poem to match .
In my country that bird is called a pettirosso ..it's a very territorial bird.
Yes at times in Italy we can still get snow in April ..
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thanks
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is a such a great response to the 5-7-5 writing prompt. What a great entry for the contest. I am ready for spring, but I do agree that the "naked" snow-covered trees are beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This is a such a great response to the 5-7-5 writing prompt. What a great entry for the contest. I am ready for spring, but I do agree that the "naked" snow-covered trees are beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer beautiful picture with the little birdie perched on a tree limb. And to have snow in the Spring, I being a born Floridian cannot relate to that. But I know that some places in the world have to be cold and some like Florida nice warm weather. Although in this picture the trees were naked the scene of the snowy backed trees with the little birdie is still beautiful
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Writer beautiful picture with the little birdie perched on a tree limb. And to have snow in the Spring, I being a born Floridian cannot relate to that. But I know that some places in the world have to be cold and some like Florida nice warm weather. Although in this picture the trees were naked the scene of the snowy backed trees with the little birdie is still beautiful
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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That's my point, even though I long for spring, one has to live in the moment and enjoy. Thanks for your review.
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My pleasure
Comment from Cheryl Baker
Your poem, "Seasons" is delightful. Snow in spring seems a strange concept but it happens. It has the correct syllable count. It is presented nicely with that gorgeous picture. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Your poem, "Seasons" is delightful. Snow in spring seems a strange concept but it happens. It has the correct syllable count. It is presented nicely with that gorgeous picture. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much, your review means so much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse describes snow in springtime.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse describes snow in springtime.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much, your review means a great deal.
Comment from William Ross
A good5,7,5 about a rather chilly spring and slow start for the budding trees, makes it easier to see the birds. god job and good luck. have a great day
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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A good5,7,5 about a rather chilly spring and slow start for the budding trees, makes it easier to see the birds. god job and good luck. have a great day
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Your review added spring to my wintery day, thank you.
Comment from Roxanne Barbour
Lovely haiku with the requisite reference to a season. :)
Technically, "Snow" should not be capitalized.
The poem's image is clearly defined.
Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Lovely haiku with the requisite reference to a season. :)
Technically, "Snow" should not be capitalized.
The poem's image is clearly defined.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello nature writer: I like your work because I'm feeling you here. I get your witty message.
Our God's handiwork has always been life's beauty, and it always will be. As for the weather's condition, let us count it all, beautiful. We are blessed, in that by His Grace; undeserved favor, He allows us to "LIVE," to experience it. That's life. Let us, go on and enjoy it. This is good work that you've done here, nature writer. Thank you for sharing. rhonnie69
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Hello nature writer: I like your work because I'm feeling you here. I get your witty message.
Our God's handiwork has always been life's beauty, and it always will be. As for the weather's condition, let us count it all, beautiful. We are blessed, in that by His Grace; undeserved favor, He allows us to "LIVE," to experience it. That's life. Let us, go on and enjoy it. This is good work that you've done here, nature writer. Thank you for sharing. rhonnie69
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Yea, weather snow, sun flowers or birds. God is quite an artist. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Marisela Contona
This is short but, beautiful! I like the image you chose for. the piece. Your structure, format, and, flow is good. I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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This is short but, beautiful! I like the image you chose for. the piece. Your structure, format, and, flow is good. I look forward to more.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much, your review means a great deal.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Wonderful 5/7/5 poetic offering. And I can so relate as I just walked through a foot of snow to our bird feeders! And yes, there is a robin - a rather disoriented robin - who has decided that in spite of northern Michigan snow in April, he is going to stay! Your verse flows well, and I love the photograph of the robin sitting on forsythia branches. Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Hello!
Wonderful 5/7/5 poetic offering. And I can so relate as I just walked through a foot of snow to our bird feeders! And yes, there is a robin - a rather disoriented robin - who has decided that in spite of northern Michigan snow in April, he is going to stay! Your verse flows well, and I love the photograph of the robin sitting on forsythia branches. Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much, your review added sunshine to my day.
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Wonderful!
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