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A Writer's Purpose

Second place winner: 5/7/5 Contest Entry

31 total reviews 
Comment from Cheryl Baker
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How true are the words of your poem? A lot is said in just a few lines of "A writer's purpose". It has the correct syllable count and is presented nicely.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
    Hello Cheryl,
    So pleased you enjoyed!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
reply by Cheryl Baker on 09-Apr-2018
    You're welcome
reply by Cheryl Baker on 10-Apr-2018
    You're welcome.
Comment from karenina
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What a perfect description of a poet's fondest aspirations! You m a naked to find the perfect illustration as well! This short poem made me smile. We try....we really try...

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
    Hello Karenina,
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
    I am glad my words made you smile!
reply by karenina on 09-Apr-2018
    I appreciate the smile.'
Comment from R Lakshmi prabha
Exceptional
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Yes! A writer is the one who imparts insight. A good choice of subject and a perfect illustration. There was a great ruler who ruled many parts of south India. In his court there were eight poets who were called Ashta Diggajas. In Indian scriptures Ashta Diggajas mean the eight mythical elephants which bear the weight of The Earth. The ruler's name was Sri Krishna Devaraya who was a good poet and he honored poets. Poets were considered to be the real rulers of the world in those days.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
    Hello!
    I am so honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review. I so enjoyed reading of the Ashta Diggajas and Sri Krishna Devaraya. Not of their calibre, but I do love writing.
    Thank you again!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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This is a perfect response to the 5-7-5 poetry prompt. Your topic of a writer's purpose was written so well. This is a wonderful entry for the contest. I wish the best of luck.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
    Hello Cindy,
    So pleased you enjoyed!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Artasylum
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The thoughts become the fuel that propels us to pluck the words that turn us inside out leave it all on page... great imagery, words and insight. thanks so much yours, diana

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
    Hello Friend!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
    Much appreciated!
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with a sentiment that most on the site will agree with
Sometimes writers plant seeds, some times saplings
Excellent art work to match words
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS.


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
    I like the idea of planting saplings! Have planted many in my lifetime!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this and the message it conveys. You've worded it superbly and I like the way that it flows throughout. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
    Hello Jeffrey!
    Much appreciation for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
    Thank you!
Comment from Sugarray77
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Your entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest is spot on!! Each of our words builds insight and leads the reader into a train of thought they might not have gone down on their own. Well said in such a few words.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
    Hello Friend,
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
    So appreciated!
Comment from Marisela Contona
Exceptional
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This piece is fun, and true. I love your color scheme, and
Image. This poem is very accurate about us. Great, structure, format, and flow. The rhyming scheme is nicely done as well.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
    Hello Marisela!
    I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
    Thank you! Keep sowing those seeds! :)
Comment from meeshu
Excellent
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very true and timely too, since you just did exactly that. superbly rendered.
this should be close to the top of the 5-7-5 contest. best of luck to you.
enjoyed it.

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
    Hello meeshu!
    So pleased you enjoyed!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
    Keep sowing!