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A Writer's Purpose

Second place winner: 5/7/5 Contest Entry

31 total reviews 
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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This is very true, my friend. A lovely job on this 5-7-5 poem. I can see how it won second place. Congrats! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
    Hello Kerry!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
    I so enjoyed penning this piece...

    diane
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 15-Apr-2018
    Welcome:)
Comment from Zue65
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I love the message of this 5/7/5, no wonder it won second place. Congratulations and keep writing. I really commend writers who cam pack up a loaded message in so few words. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hello Susan,
    This one was fun to pen.
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!

    diane
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 and explanation of the writer's most important purpose. They sow seeds of thoughts and words to bring insight and sometimes inspire others.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hello Sandra,
    I so enjoyed penning this little piece.
    Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review...

    diane
Comment from zanya
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Yes an interesting and appropriate summation here of the writer's purpose on life's journey - let's hope we succeed even a little in this challenge 'to impart insight'-

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hello zanya,
    Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
    I so enjoyed penning this little "insight."

    diane
Comment from Vivien Lamond
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A great 5-7-5 poem entry. It brilliantly describes the role of a writer while using enjambment to emphasise the different aspects. I hope to be able to live up to its reputation at some point!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hello Vivien,
    Thank you for stopping by and for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
    I so enjoyed penning this little piece.

    diane
reply by Vivien Lamond on 11-Apr-2018
Comment from jenintorre
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Too right. You have written a great 5-7-5 poem with a really good message and chosen very good artwork. I wish you good luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hello Jen,
    So pleased you enjoyed!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review...

    diane
Comment from Angela Post
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This is a great entry for the contest. You have captured the essence of what it means to be a writer and it makes me feel proud to be part of the writing community.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hello Angela,
    So pleased my little poem resonated with you.
    Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
    Stop by again!

    diane
Comment from Michael Steinert
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This is very inspirational to read as am very new to the site. You follow the scheme perfectly and have chosen a great image. I look forward to reading more and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Hello Michael.
    So pleased you enjoyed.
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
    And welcome!

    diane
Comment from Fabiha_N
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This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest! It is well-written, and your words are true. It clearly conveys a writer's purpose of telling a reader different thoughts and feelings. I like the picture you chose to display as well. Great work :)

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
    Hello Febiha,
    So pleased you enjoyed!
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
    So appreciated!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Bullseye!
This clever 5 7 5 poem encapsulates in just seventeen syllables exactly what I also feel a writer's purpose is.
Cleverly thought and presented to highlight your thought process.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
    Hello Shirley!
    So pleased you enjoyed my offering and that it resonated with you.
    Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.