Failure
Don't give up the day job10 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You've summed this up beautifully in just a few words. I guess if you want to be a musician or entertainer and can't sing or dance then, you'll have a very short career. The accompanying artwork is spot on. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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You've summed this up beautifully in just a few words. I guess if you want to be a musician or entertainer and can't sing or dance then, you'll have a very short career. The accompanying artwork is spot on. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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I appreciate your comments. Many thanks.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Failure, has the correct format and seems to find the performer in a moment of self-doubt, just prior, I'm sure, to a full-tilt resurgence and a show-stopping comeback.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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This 5-7-5, Failure, has the correct format and seems to find the performer in a moment of self-doubt, just prior, I'm sure, to a full-tilt resurgence and a show-stopping comeback.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Yep sure. Something like that. Thanks a lot for commenting.
Comment from meeshu
very funny, but I resemble those remarks. good to see you having fun with
this 5-7-5 format. I think it lends itself more to humor than seriousness.
good luck to ya.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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very funny, but I resemble those remarks. good to see you having fun with
this 5-7-5 format. I think it lends itself more to humor than seriousness.
good luck to ya.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Marge Setzer
I laughed at the end. I can relate. You did discover a talent, though you may not be aware of it. How about writer? Good luck in the contest. I liked this. Marge
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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I laughed at the end. I can relate. You did discover a talent, though you may not be aware of it. How about writer? Good luck in the contest. I liked this. Marge
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much Marge.
Comment from karenina
Hah! You are skilled enough to keep that darn day job! Not everyone is meant to be a "star"----except in their wildest dreams!
Maybe you'll come back as CHER....but then again, at this rate she will live to bee 100!
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hah! You are skilled enough to keep that darn day job! Not everyone is meant to be a "star"----except in their wildest dreams!
Maybe you'll come back as CHER....but then again, at this rate she will live to bee 100!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Maybe I'll come back as Madonna. So glad you liked my bit of nonsense Thanks a lot.
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If so, I hope you make the money she does!
Comment from Elizabeth Joanne
Quite to the point. And I definitely love the artwork that you connected with this work. I think it's a great combination and it all adds a little smile and chuckle to our day. Thank you
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Quite to the point. And I definitely love the artwork that you connected with this work. I think it's a great combination and it all adds a little smile and chuckle to our day. Thank you
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for your omments
Comment from rspoet
This is a solid 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with a good bit of humor
You can't win if you don't try,
somewhere there must be something
the person is good at.
Nicely done
Good luck in the talent contest
RS
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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This is a solid 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with a good bit of humor
You can't win if you don't try,
somewhere there must be something
the person is good at.
Nicely done
Good luck in the talent contest
RS
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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I'm so pleased you liked my silly little poem. Thank you so much
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Your photo is vivid and colorful and enhances the theme of your short verse. Good luck on this one.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Your photo is vivid and colorful and enhances the theme of your short verse. Good luck on this one.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your comments
Comment from tfawcus
Better stick to poetry where your words can do the singing. I'm reminded of an English comedian who said that he had a belly full of music but a bad road out!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Better stick to poetry where your words can do the singing. I'm reminded of an English comedian who said that he had a belly full of music but a bad road out!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thank you for reviewing
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of having no talent, but trying anyways.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of having no talent, but trying anyways.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks Sharon.
