A New Trick
Naani Poetry16 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Sugarray, I popped in to have a read and guess which one caught my attention? : -)... The picture is an absolute classic and so adorably cute! Love it and enjoyed your poem which brought on a wide smile. Thank you for sharing. ~DD
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Sugarray, I popped in to have a read and guess which one caught my attention? : -)... The picture is an absolute classic and so adorably cute! Love it and enjoyed your poem which brought on a wide smile. Thank you for sharing. ~DD
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review. I had fun with this one. He?s just so cute!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer I don't know where you got this picture from but it is a jewel in the rough. I love it I love it I love it and the words make it so much more genuinely cute and authentic. He is so adorable I almost just didn't need the word for the words make it more Super kids are so innocent and their gestures are so sweet
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Writer I don't know where you got this picture from but it is a jewel in the rough. I love it I love it I love it and the words make it so much more genuinely cute and authentic. He is so adorable I almost just didn't need the word for the words make it more Super kids are so innocent and their gestures are so sweet
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for this great review. He is adorable, isn?t he. Thanks again!
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Is that your son or grandson?
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No, but I thought he fit my story/poem very well. When my nephew began to ?wink?, he would always close both eyes instead. That?s what I was thinking of when I wrote it. Thanks again.
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Loved it
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, A New Trick, uses twenty-five syllables and four lines to melt us with those cherished moments when kids get new skills and have us witness. So funny.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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This naani, A New Trick, uses twenty-five syllables and four lines to melt us with those cherished moments when kids get new skills and have us witness. So funny.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thank you Bill for the great review.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Oh how cute is that!!!! Excellent Naani Poem and delightful photo are perfect for the prompt. I am not a poet, so whatever you decide is fine, but in prose there would be a comma before Mommy - Are you watching me(,) Momma? That's it. Great job!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Oh how cute is that!!!! Excellent Naani Poem and delightful photo are perfect for the prompt. I am not a poet, so whatever you decide is fine, but in prose there would be a comma before Mommy - Are you watching me(,) Momma? That's it. Great job!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the comments. I appreciate the suggestion and I?ll look in to that. I appreciate your good review.
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You're welcome
Comment from cupa tea
ha ha ha...I'm not too sure about winking..but that baby has a wonderful smile! You wrote the poem centered around the image I'm guessing. Good pick...Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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ha ha ha...I'm not too sure about winking..but that baby has a wonderful smile! You wrote the poem centered around the image I'm guessing. Good pick...Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thank you Cupa. This time I had the verse first, but was lucky enough to find the perfect photo. appreciate the review!!
Comment from Joan E.
What a cute picture selection to match your clever naani! I did not know what to expect for the punchline and found the "trick" very appealing. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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What a cute picture selection to match your clever naani! I did not know what to expect for the punchline and found the "trick" very appealing. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks Joan. This was a fun one to write. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
That photo is so precious. I had to smile! This is a sweet little Naani poem and a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. In just 24 syllables you have told a wonderful and lighthearted little story.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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That photo is so precious. I had to smile! This is a sweet little Naani poem and a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. In just 24 syllables you have told a wonderful and lighthearted little story.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks. It was a fun one to put together. I appreciate your review.
Comment from sunnilicious
Ooo that was too cute. Great presentation. Well thought out and clearly written. Fun and witty. So precious. Nice work. Good luck in the contest. Peace be upon you :)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Ooo that was too cute. Great presentation. Well thought out and clearly written. Fun and witty. So precious. Nice work. Good luck in the contest. Peace be upon you :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much. I appreciate it!
Comment from jenintorre
Ah the picture is so so cute and so is your Naani poem. I think it will do well in the
Competition. Good luck and best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Ah the picture is so so cute and so is your Naani poem. I think it will do well in the
Competition. Good luck and best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much! I apapreciate your good review.
Comment from meeshu
Cute. underlying is the wonder in the simplest things. how else can we
explain the magic that is the Three Stooges. good luck in contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Cute. underlying is the wonder in the simplest things. how else can we
explain the magic that is the Three Stooges. good luck in contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the cute review!!
