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Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good verse for the Six Word Poetry writing prompt.
Too cute and funny. Well done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good verse for the Six Word Poetry writing prompt.
Too cute and funny. Well done.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thank you Sharon.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
To be able to create such a humorous situation in just 6 simple words is quite a feat. The picture you chose draws the reader in already being bemused and slightly amused. You presented a very strong commitment in two lines. It causes the reader to wonder what you have in mind and leads them to relate this statement to their own need to affirm themselves. There's an interesting parallel here. You also had to know this about yourself to have been able to write such a challenging poem. Good work.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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To be able to create such a humorous situation in just 6 simple words is quite a feat. The picture you chose draws the reader in already being bemused and slightly amused. You presented a very strong commitment in two lines. It causes the reader to wonder what you have in mind and leads them to relate this statement to their own need to affirm themselves. There's an interesting parallel here. You also had to know this about yourself to have been able to write such a challenging poem. Good work.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Liz.
