Comment from karenina

Excellent

Condolences to you and your family on her loss. She sounds like she had an amazing spirit and zest for life...an inspiration to each of us who tend to whine (like me) when I have a paper cut. God Bless.

Karenina

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good verse for the Rictameter writing prompt.
Well done.
Your verse is a nice tribute to your sister-in-law.
The description of a rictameter in the prompt says that the last lines / words are to be identical to the first. I may be reading this wrong, but you might want to look again.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018

Yikes, Sharon!
I never read that part of the prompt.
Thank you for pointing that out to me...
And thank you for your kind review!

reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018

Thank you again, Sharon!
I fixed the first and last lines.
That was close!

reply by Sharon Haiste on 06-Apr-2018

You are very welcome.