Farewell, Sister
Double Rictameter in honor of my sister-in-law12 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Thank you for sharing this little poem about the passing of your sister. I know it must be hard anytime you lose a loved one it takes us in a place of grief and although there's nothing that we can do about it we miss them so and just long to have them there one more time
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thank you for sharing this little poem about the passing of your sister. I know it must be hard anytime you lose a loved one it takes us in a place of grief and although there's nothing that we can do about it we miss them so and just long to have them there one more time
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Hello Mary,
I am honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review.
With all of her daily challenges, my sister-in-law had an indomitable spirit...
Thank you again...
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So nice to have read about her. Your memories of her will last forever
Comment from Artasylum
This is a lovely love poem to your sister-n-law. On Easter is a particularly hard day... i know Easter changes every year but... God bless the family and friends who loved her o much. thanks for the share. yours, diana
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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This is a lovely love poem to your sister-n-law. On Easter is a particularly hard day... i know Easter changes every year but... God bless the family and friends who loved her o much. thanks for the share. yours, diana
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Hello diana,
Thank you ever so much for your excellent rating and thoughtful review...
I so appreciate your kind words...
Comment from kathleenspalding
Lovely Rictameter Poem with peaceful photograph is a beautiful tribute to your sister-in-law. I'm glad she was loved so well. Our sympathies for your loss.
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Lovely Rictameter Poem with peaceful photograph is a beautiful tribute to your sister-in-law. I'm glad she was loved so well. Our sympathies for your loss.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
Comment from royowen
It is a lovely thing to write a tribute to another person, especially someone as loved as Pat, you're sister in law, thank you for doing so. Using one's gift to bless others is what it's all about. Well done, a great entry in this contest, accurate syllable count, well done, blessings, Roy
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It is a lovely thing to write a tribute to another person, especially someone as loved as Pat, you're sister in law, thank you for doing so. Using one's gift to bless others is what it's all about. Well done, a great entry in this contest, accurate syllable count, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
What a lovely memorial poem you wrote and entered in this rictameter contest. It is lovely and well composed. The serene photography you included is the perfect compliment to your words. Well done and good luck.
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What a lovely memorial poem you wrote and entered in this rictameter contest. It is lovely and well composed. The serene photography you included is the perfect compliment to your words. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
Comment from Harry Smith
Wow! I really like the picture selection for this beautifully written and presented poem that has lots of imagery and emotions. The reader like the work and will be back to read more.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Wow! I really like the picture selection for this beautifully written and presented poem that has lots of imagery and emotions. The reader like the work and will be back to read more.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello!
So pleased you enjoyed the artwork and poem.
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a very touching poem and a fine tribute to your sister with her challenges and strengths. The cadence of your poem communicates your deep grief. Pausing in the middle of a thought is indicative of a struggle to be able to continue the thought because it is just too painful. There is an uplifting tone when you speak of her greeting each day with purpose. This gives the reader a challenge that they too might live with such example of joy despite their struggles. A very lovely work.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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This is a very touching poem and a fine tribute to your sister with her challenges and strengths. The cadence of your poem communicates your deep grief. Pausing in the middle of a thought is indicative of a struggle to be able to continue the thought because it is just too painful. There is an uplifting tone when you speak of her greeting each day with purpose. This gives the reader a challenge that they too might live with such example of joy despite their struggles. A very lovely work.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Liz,
Thank you ever so much for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
Pat taught all of a great deal about how to live...
Thank you!
Comment from Katya
Oh, that's wonderful. A sweet and generous tribute. I like the way the -ess sounds weave their way through it. I've never seen this form before, and I was very interested to see how it works.
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Oh, that's wonderful. A sweet and generous tribute. I like the way the -ess sounds weave their way through it. I've never seen this form before, and I was very interested to see how it works.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
Comment from meeshu
beautiful tribute to a loved one. the form is great. and the substance fits perfectly. I am sorry for your loss. you have given her a lasting legacy.
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beautiful tribute to a loved one. the form is great. and the substance fits perfectly. I am sorry for your loss. you have given her a lasting legacy.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
Comment from Susan Burger
And a lovely post it is. Sorry for you and your family's loss. It sounds like Pat was a wonderful person to know. I am sure she would be honored by your words. Your poem is a good entry for this contest. Best of luck in this competition.
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And a lovely post it is. Sorry for you and your family's loss. It sounds like Pat was a wonderful person to know. I am sure she would be honored by your words. Your poem is a good entry for this contest. Best of luck in this competition.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
