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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Scene at a Dentist Office (Part 1)"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
He's in for a shock! Poor guy. Probably has a dozen cavities. Hope he has dental insurance. Well, at least he's at the dentist's office. That's a start. I want to hear him scream in Part 2. Hehehe.
I'm a great dental patient. I never want novacaine. I just tough it out. Must have a high pain threshhold. :)
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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He's in for a shock! Poor guy. Probably has a dozen cavities. Hope he has dental insurance. Well, at least he's at the dentist's office. That's a start. I want to hear him scream in Part 2. Hehehe.
I'm a great dental patient. I never want novacaine. I just tough it out. Must have a high pain threshhold. :)
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Some get gas just to read the bill.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a fun that the man had earlier been at somewhere else not at a dentist; now it is the office of a dentist, truth revealed, mistaken experience; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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This speaks a fun that the man had earlier been at somewhere else not at a dentist; now it is the office of a dentist, truth revealed, mistaken experience; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Marge Setzer
How can you miss with a (dare I say it?) loony-tune like Pons? I can't figure out if he's naturally a question mark or if these words that come out of his mouth are malapropisms (not sure I have the right word - bad for a former English teacher. I read part 2 before this one and had misgivings about the dentist, too - wondered if he and Pons had some sort of genetic relationship. There's much to ponder (no pun intended) here. The last line was a hoot and worth all the translations before it. Marge
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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How can you miss with a (dare I say it?) loony-tune like Pons? I can't figure out if he's naturally a question mark or if these words that come out of his mouth are malapropisms (not sure I have the right word - bad for a former English teacher. I read part 2 before this one and had misgivings about the dentist, too - wondered if he and Pons had some sort of genetic relationship. There's much to ponder (no pun intended) here. The last line was a hoot and worth all the translations before it. Marge
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thank you, Marge, for the exceptional review. People often confuse Ned (dim) with Pons (straight man) because of their names. Pons seems, I suppose, a name for a goof. I used it because the ?pons? is part of the brain and aids communication.
Comment from Artasylum
Hey Bill,
He's in for a horrible surprise. That doctur shuvin' his faas in Neds'. I try the colloquial every time and it just doesn't happen for me. Love the voice. yours, di
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Hey Bill,
He's in for a horrible surprise. That doctur shuvin' his faas in Neds'. I try the colloquial every time and it just doesn't happen for me. Love the voice. yours, di
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thank you, Di, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
Just reading the characters and imagining the conversation with there accents was humorous enough, I found it believable and enjoyable, good work ....
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Just reading the characters and imagining the conversation with there accents was humorous enough, I found it believable and enjoyable, good work ....
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thanks, Phillip.
Comment from karenina
I have avoided all scripts since I am ignorant on the way to write or present them, but your title pulled me in and I cracked up reading your sorta 1960's style sitcom! Scabies....cavities. Can I see your poetic script license please? LOL....
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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I have avoided all scripts since I am ignorant on the way to write or present them, but your title pulled me in and I cracked up reading your sorta 1960's style sitcom! Scabies....cavities. Can I see your poetic script license please? LOL....
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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I know; those words don?t sound much alike. Thanks for giving this a look.
Comment from Teri7
lol This is too comical. You used very cute descriptive words and funny dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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lol This is too comical. You used very cute descriptive words and funny dialogue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Sounds like Ned likes the dentist about as much as I do! My teeth, however, are in better shape, I think.
I always get a kick out of the Ned and Pons scripts. The more you write on them, the better the comedy gets. Good one!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Sounds like Ned likes the dentist about as much as I do! My teeth, however, are in better shape, I think.
I always get a kick out of the Ned and Pons scripts. The more you write on them, the better the comedy gets. Good one!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Brenda.
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You're welcome, Bill!
Comment from Harry Smith
Excellent. I did not know you were a script writer and you are in the number one spot! This is the first script I remember reading of yours Bill. I have read a lot of your poetry. I really like the script and will be back to read more. This was a pleasant surprise.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Excellent. I did not know you were a script writer and you are in the number one spot! This is the first script I remember reading of yours Bill. I have read a lot of your poetry. I really like the script and will be back to read more. This was a pleasant surprise.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Harry. If you go to any member's site, you can open their PORTFOLIO and read their work. This script and others about Pons and Ned are in the book, SCENES.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hello, Bill.
Been awhile since I've had the pleasure of reading a Pons and Ned story. I kind'a missed 'em.
I would wager that poor Dr. Dennis will have his hands full when he takes a gander in Ned's mouth.
Of course, Gander geese are kind'a temperamental so he'll probably have a hard time gettin' her in there.
One thing's for sure; Ned won't require any laughing gas. He's already goofy enough as it is.
Funny stuff!
~Dean
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Hello, Bill.
Been awhile since I've had the pleasure of reading a Pons and Ned story. I kind'a missed 'em.
I would wager that poor Dr. Dennis will have his hands full when he takes a gander in Ned's mouth.
Of course, Gander geese are kind'a temperamental so he'll probably have a hard time gettin' her in there.
One thing's for sure; Ned won't require any laughing gas. He's already goofy enough as it is.
Funny stuff!
~Dean
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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I?m happy you gave the boys a look. I?ve been deposing them in a book in my portfolio called SCENES. I?ve had to divide the last set (scene at a play) into three parts. Ned gets so far afield I have to stop and start. So glad you could visit.
