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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "ZigZagging through the Alphabet"
Daily poems for April 2018

19 total reviews 
Comment from Artasylum
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Hi Chrissy... you deserve an A + to infinity for this one... sooooo well done you are a super hero for this one. everything is perfect. keep the surprises coming. yrs, diana

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
    Hi Diane, Thank you for reading my poem for this Challenge and running a little behind now trying to catch up LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Harry Smith
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You did a fantastic job with this poem. The presentation is very good with a picture that really compliments the poem and a poem that is very well written with lots of imagery.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
    Hi HarryThank you for reading my poem and It was a fun challenge to ger through I enjoy these and glad to have yoir feedback Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A marathon write using all the alphabet letters and this is quite a challenge and you managed to perfect it here with your wonderful words, a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
    Hi Dolly Thanks so much and it was chalenging bu I got there in the end but I am behind in myApril Post busy weekend so I will have to fet going to make it up Cheers Christine
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a unique and fun challenge to go through the whole alphabet to write a poem about writing. I smiled when I read: questioning my syllables...I've been there. This was entertaining.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
    Hi Cindy Thanks amd yes I am often questioning my Syllables LOL they can make or break you Glad ypu enjoyed this Cheers Christine
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Well done. You zigged and zagged quite nicely through that.
Your poem flows and has a good rhythm.
Thank you for sharing this fun verse with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
    Hi Sharon Thanks and it was fun to do but now I am behind in my posts busy weekend so have to catch up Cheers Christine
Comment from karenina
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Any
Body
Can
Dream

Even
Fools.

Generally
However
I deal with the
Juxtaposition.s

Kicks and
Hiccups.

Luck
May be
Needed.

Or
Potions magical...

Quagmires
rise up
sneakily...

Then, alas,
Unbelievably-
Victory!

(Wonderously??)

Xanthic
(Yellow)
Zanyism!




(Did I miss a letter cuz that was all kinds of fun!)


Karenina




 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
    Abolutely
    Beautiful
    Crafted
    Did
    Every
    Finicky
    Gap
    Harvesting
    Inventive
    Judicoius
    Knowledgeable
    Lines
    Making
    Narrative
    Observable
    Personifying
    Quality
    Resources
    Spontaneously
    Taken
    Under
    Various
    Words
    Xyresic
    Yeasty
    Zeal

    Xyresic (razor sharp)
    Yeasty (exhuberantly creative)
    Zeal ( ardently devoted to a purpose)

    Thanks foy your fun review Cheers Christine
reply by karenina on 07-Apr-2018
    Xresic!? Never heard of it but love the definition! :)
Comment from meeshu
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well done and fun, Christine. gets tougher toward the end doesn't it.
I like the "circle" of writing about how tough it is to write the poem you're writing.
but you stole the picture from one of mine....kidding, fits yours better.......meeshu

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
    Hi meeshu, Thanks and yes these letters do get harder But I think these worked reasonably well LOL the pic was the only letter one so it gets used a lot too Ha Ha Cheers Christine
reply by meeshu on 06-Apr-2018
    you're welcome. and I just noticed the cleverness in the title Z-A.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello!
Well, you certainly "zigzagged" with a flair! What a challenge! And you completed it with creativity. I enjoyed reading your entire poem - anticipating what you were going to write for each letter. Kudos!

diane

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
    Hi Diane, Thanks you and It is chellenging I have done a few with the alphabet but this was a bit different X&Z always hard Bit I am pleased you enjoyed this one.Cheers christine


    Hi Diane, Thanks for your review I am pleased you enjoyed this and the letter are challenging especialky X z LOL Busy weekend coming up Cheers Christine



Comment from Teri7
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Christine, This is a great ABC poem titled Zigzagging Through the Alphabet. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
    Hi Teri, Thanks for your review it was fun to try to get throughthe alphabet but made it LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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This is more than a zigzagging through the alphabet. It is rather a blissful and progressive slide along the alphabet.

The work earns its texture through the etching of the alphabet into a semblance of an acrostic poem.

Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
    Hi Lloyd, Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my Acrostic thype alphabet LOL a fun challenge Flag hoisted Cheers Christine
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 06-Apr-2018
    Remain Blessed!