A Foundation for Faith
2-5-2 Spiritual12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-five-two, A Foundation for Faith, has the correct set up and seems to implore people to delve into the Word in the Bible, not the organized BS on the television.
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This two-five-two, A Foundation for Faith, has the correct set up and seems to implore people to delve into the Word in the Bible, not the organized BS on the television.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
In such a short poem your message stands up strong and is very powerful. This is a strong contender for the 2-5-2 contest. I wish you all the best. Good luck!
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In such a short poem your message stands up strong and is very powerful. This is a strong contender for the 2-5-2 contest. I wish you all the best. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Cheryl Baker
This is a lovely thought-provoking poem, A Foundation of Faith, I enjoyed reading it. Lots of meaning in such a few words. The picture is wonderful and compliments it so well.
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This is a lovely thought-provoking poem, A Foundation of Faith, I enjoyed reading it. Lots of meaning in such a few words. The picture is wonderful and compliments it so well.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 2-5-2 poem you have penned for the contest about Jesus. You said a lot with your words and the comments. Art work went well with your words to. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written 2-5-2 poem you have penned for the contest about Jesus. You said a lot with your words and the comments. Art work went well with your words to. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like the clear message that this poem conveys. You summed up so many wonderful things in so few words. You've done a fine job in informing the reader of what truth is. I like this. Well done!
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I really like the clear message that this poem conveys. You summed up so many wonderful things in so few words. You've done a fine job in informing the reader of what truth is. I like this. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yes writer I find that religious beliefs and just going to Church just Smothers out out the true relationship one should have with Jesus. And when you think on his goodness to us in his true existence in our hearts, it takes us to another level of love and compassion for one another in the world would truly be a better place if we lived on that plane I'm just representing him and his love. And Jesus is truth cannot lie and in him is life he is the way the truth and the life
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Yes writer I find that religious beliefs and just going to Church just Smothers out out the true relationship one should have with Jesus. And when you think on his goodness to us in his true existence in our hearts, it takes us to another level of love and compassion for one another in the world would truly be a better place if we lived on that plane I'm just representing him and his love. And Jesus is truth cannot lie and in him is life he is the way the truth and the life
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A profound write and wise words and only six of them! Faithful words to give us some home in the rememberance, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
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A profound write and wise words and only six of them! Faithful words to give us some home in the rememberance, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from meeshu
well stated and very concise. very few but very powerful words.
best of luck with the prompt contest. I think you should do well
with this entry.......meeshu
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well stated and very concise. very few but very powerful words.
best of luck with the prompt contest. I think you should do well
with this entry.......meeshu
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, what a lovely work of art you've chosen for this poem. I like your bold statement about Jesus and appreciate the sentiment. He gives so freely of those attributes you say at the end. Love, inclusion, remorse, forgiveness, and redemption. Because we can't have forgiveness unless we are filled with remorse for things we've done. I noticed no errors, and thanks for sharing this spiritual verse, Ana.
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Hello, what a lovely work of art you've chosen for this poem. I like your bold statement about Jesus and appreciate the sentiment. He gives so freely of those attributes you say at the end. Love, inclusion, remorse, forgiveness, and redemption. Because we can't have forgiveness unless we are filled with remorse for things we've done. I noticed no errors, and thanks for sharing this spiritual verse, Ana.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from poetwatch
Our lives are in his hands. We love with our heart not with our desires. Our neighbors are our family no matter where they reside. We must forgive even if forgiveness is not our strong virtue. No hate should be. We must smile and bring smiles. This is a good entry for the 2-5-2 contest.
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Our lives are in his hands. We love with our heart not with our desires. Our neighbors are our family no matter where they reside. We must forgive even if forgiveness is not our strong virtue. No hate should be. We must smile and bring smiles. This is a good entry for the 2-5-2 contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
