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Haiku and Senryu Suites

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Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites

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Comment from Bucketlist
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That last stanza reminds me ofpersonalty changes, and the picture looks to me like some kind of racetrack . You always write mysterious, thought provoking 'stuff'. I like reading your diverse thoughts on life. A different poem type,.
Blessed to be able to read your penning

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
    I am bus to have you read my writing and all for your feedback.
    BB
reply by Bucketlist on 06-Apr-2018
    Blessings come in all shapes and sizesLOL
Comment from apky
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Wonderful, so true and inspiring.

I really enjoyed this and came away with much, especially in my favourite stanzas below:

when the way is bright
everything is brought to light
becoming clearer

but at times, some things
can only be brought to light
wothout being seen

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    You guys to hear from you, thanks for the wonderful, so f****** texting with me I was my work work I'm pretty much riding everyday again now especially hi cuz I really appreciate the comet and help with the type of I appreciate all lot. Blessings, Darren
Comment from meeshu
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really quite good,
Badger. great idea, taking up the ladder of light, as it where.
a little Typo in last line, but that can be fixed.....meeshu

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comments, and now nice is is to meet you here in this creative space. It's a distinct pleasure and it honor to write with you here, and thanks a lot for the help with the typo,
    I really appreciate it. Blessings, Brother Badger aka Darren