Haiku and Senryu Suites
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Connectrum ll"Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites
4 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
This was intriguing! You have such a way of expressing ideas, in this one it's circular. . I like the 5-7-5 style. I'm glad you are back writing again.
Bucketlist
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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This was intriguing! You have such a way of expressing ideas, in this one it's circular. . I like the 5-7-5 style. I'm glad you are back writing again.
Bucketlist
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your continued support, I appreciate your comments and feedback.
Blessings,
Darren
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Never a problem B.B.
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You are welcome!
Comment from His Grayness
Say what?? Divine matrix to be considered etal! HIS GRAYNESS
Bring this one back round again, star blockage engaged! lot's of fun delivered and anticipated@FS;
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Say what?? Divine matrix to be considered etal! HIS GRAYNESS
Bring this one back round again, star blockage engaged! lot's of fun delivered and anticipated@FS;
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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etal? Did you mean eternal,?
Please explain.
Thanks, Darren
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is what I hope is the answer. That we do go on as we relate to time, and the mind is infinite. You've certainly written some powerful work that takes us on a thoughtful journey. Excellent! Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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This is what I hope is the answer. That we do go on as we relate to time, and the mind is infinite. You've certainly written some powerful work that takes us on a thoughtful journey. Excellent! Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thanks again for your continued support
Darren n
Comment from Pamusart
I am a little bit confused. This is the second consecutive I have reviewed which is about the human version of time where we use clocks and watches. So, this is talking about two sides of the space/time continuum. On one side this and the other side that. This is my favorite phrase. "time is relative
and space goes on forever
they are connected". Deep. For all we know, time goes on forever as well. Just not humans in their physical form. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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I am a little bit confused. This is the second consecutive I have reviewed which is about the human version of time where we use clocks and watches. So, this is talking about two sides of the space/time continuum. On one side this and the other side that. This is my favorite phrase. "time is relative
and space goes on forever
they are connected". Deep. For all we know, time goes on forever as well. Just not humans in their physical form. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thanks, and this is actually in extension of a poem. that I wrote called
"Connectrum/Spectronnection that is a poem about how all of Spectrums are connected. You can find it in my portfolio. I really appreciate your insightful comments ,and its obvious that you are a reader pays attention and remembers
Thanks again,
Darren
