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Comment from karenina
Pride and middle age crises go before the (very bad,) fall...
This dribble fiction style is new to me.
I may be day rip myself from poetry and try my hand at this...
You certainly concisely made a point (and a big dent) in this topic!
Concise does not have to mean shallow!
Nice!
Karenina
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Pride and middle age crises go before the (very bad,) fall...
This dribble fiction style is new to me.
I may be day rip myself from poetry and try my hand at this...
You certainly concisely made a point (and a big dent) in this topic!
Concise does not have to mean shallow!
Nice!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Michael,
Make up your mind dude, drabble in the description line for a dribble competition... lol
I hope this does well. I had a good laugh.
All the best and good luck,
G
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Hi Michael,
Make up your mind dude, drabble in the description line for a dribble competition... lol
I hope this does well. I had a good laugh.
All the best and good luck,
G
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
Comment from Marisela Contona
I like this it flows nice. You have good word choses. Keep writing, you have great skill. I look forward to reading more of your work
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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I like this it flows nice. You have good word choses. Keep writing, you have great skill. I look forward to reading more of your work
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Aww ... I bet you say that to every single author you read in just those exact words. :))
Comment from Gloria ....
Mav, this is what happens when one talks to oneself, yes? Little did he know the Porsche had a mind of its own but at least he went out in fashion or at least that's what's implied.
A terrible dribble, Mav. And a flash too, so I'd say you've nagged this contest with incontrovertible evidence of the superior male intellect. Cars count on that, or used to anyway.
Best wishes to you in the contest with this beauty.
Ange
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Mav, this is what happens when one talks to oneself, yes? Little did he know the Porsche had a mind of its own but at least he went out in fashion or at least that's what's implied.
A terrible dribble, Mav. And a flash too, so I'd say you've nagged this contest with incontrovertible evidence of the superior male intellect. Cars count on that, or used to anyway.
Best wishes to you in the contest with this beauty.
Ange
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
Comment from apky
OOoooops! Well now it is flying right off - nag that, bitch.
Thanks for making me get into stiches. I actually know somebody in my family who is crazy like that - buys oldtimers and get's them "hotted up" - then goes off recklessly... No care that a wreckage of any of the cars would set him back - if there's still enough of him left to set back - tens and hundreds of thousands of euros!
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OOoooops! Well now it is flying right off - nag that, bitch.
Thanks for making me get into stiches. I actually know somebody in my family who is crazy like that - buys oldtimers and get's them "hotted up" - then goes off recklessly... No care that a wreckage of any of the cars would set him back - if there's still enough of him left to set back - tens and hundreds of thousands of euros!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction writing prompt.
You have packed a lot of story into those few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction writing prompt.
You have packed a lot of story into those few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
