Beauty!
Beauty is the product of creativity.73 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
That is lovely and I truly wish you well in the contest.
I have a question that I hope doesn't annoy you, it's just that my first reaction was why the use of "the"? Why waste one of your 6 words on "the?" Why not True beauty emanates from life's creativity, or from nature's creativity (going by your accompanying picture). You probably had a good reason. I would love to know your thinking as I read that your poems are read internationally.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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That is lovely and I truly wish you well in the contest.
I have a question that I hope doesn't annoy you, it's just that my first reaction was why the use of "the"? Why waste one of your 6 words on "the?" Why not True beauty emanates from life's creativity, or from nature's creativity (going by your accompanying picture). You probably had a good reason. I would love to know your thinking as I read that your poems are read internationally.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Katharine,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely and encouraging comments.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Nice little poem and good entry for the 6 word poem contest. It's very difficult for some people to get their point and imagery across in 6 words but you did a good job.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Nice little poem and good entry for the 6 word poem contest. It's very difficult for some people to get their point and imagery across in 6 words but you did a good job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Blue Hendrix,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely and encouraging comments.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from fastdigits
Six words of artistic endeavor that depicts the old adage of stop hurrying through life and stop and smell the roses.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Six words of artistic endeavor that depicts the old adage of stop hurrying through life and stop and smell the roses.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Fastdiqits,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely, encouraging comments backed by Good Luck Wishes and SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from ameen786
I agree my friend, just as a sculptor creates beauty out of stone. One suggestion if you don't mind, the word 'the' seems awkward in your crafty verse...may be replace it, just a thought; good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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I agree my friend, just as a sculptor creates beauty out of stone. One suggestion if you don't mind, the word 'the' seems awkward in your crafty verse...may be replace it, just a thought; good luck!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Ameen786,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely, encouraging comments and Good luck wishes.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from victor 66
Well Sir, I guess I'm just not that sophisticated. The "the" in your poem doesn't fit for me. I may not know what I'm talking about but I like, "Nature's beauty emanates from life's creativity". Best wishes.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Well Sir, I guess I'm just not that sophisticated. The "the" in your poem doesn't fit for me. I may not know what I'm talking about but I like, "Nature's beauty emanates from life's creativity". Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Victor66,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely, encouraging comments and Best Wishes.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a great entry for the six word poetry contest! It's well-written, and the inner message conveyed is true. Beauty truly does exist in all of life's creativity. I love the picture you chose to display too, it's very appealing!
Great work :)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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This is a great entry for the six word poetry contest! It's well-written, and the inner message conveyed is true. Beauty truly does exist in all of life's creativity. I love the picture you chose to display too, it's very appealing!
Great work :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Fabiha N,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely and encouraging comments.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, a lovely short work that is beautifully published with that great picture. I thought the sentiment was lovely and achieved through your careful word choices.
And beauty is born from life's creativity. Nicely written and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello, a lovely short work that is beautifully published with that great picture. I thought the sentiment was lovely and achieved through your careful word choices.
And beauty is born from life's creativity. Nicely written and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Ana,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely and encouraging comments.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Chrissy710
Yes you are very right and some creations just astound you with their beauty A very good 6 word poem best of luck in the contest Cheers Lovely image too Christine
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Yes you are very right and some creations just astound you with their beauty A very good 6 word poem best of luck in the contest Cheers Lovely image too Christine
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Chrissy710,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely, encouraging comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Ricky1024
'Beauty' is a Six Word's Poetry Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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'Beauty' is a Six Word's Poetry Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Dr. Ricky,
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely, encouraging comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Wow! Creativity does evoke beauty and in six short words, you've done a "beautiful" job in explaining that. This is a solid and strong entry for the six-word poetry contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Wow! Creativity does evoke beauty and in six short words, you've done a "beautiful" job in explaining that. This is a solid and strong entry for the six-word poetry contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hello Cindy Mclntyre
Thank you very much for your so kind, lovely and encouraging comments.
Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
