Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This naani, Remembered, uses twenty-five syllables and four lines to remind us that beauty may be fleeting, but memory is a gift that keeps on giving.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018

Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

"A rose by any other name" would still be remembered for the beauty and scent. I believe the red rose has a particular association with the heart because of the color of blood and passion it evokes. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks for the read and the comments. Appreciated.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Naani Poetry writing prompt.
Your story of the beautiful rose remembered is clear and well written within your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

A very well-written naani here. Good theme and execution. It works on a purely literal interpretation but also as a metaphor for this human condition.

Nicely done
GMG

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018

Thank you for the read and review. I was hoping the metaphor would work.