Puncturing Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "No Relief 2003?"My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."
6 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS 6******What beautiful gifts your son gave, as his passing kept other people living, as his organs were implanted into people awaiting these organs. Yes, you son's spirit still lives on, Ricky! Now, don't you worry. You live your life happy and free from pain and worry. lol your friend forever, liberty justice
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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SIX STARS 6******What beautiful gifts your son gave, as his passing kept other people living, as his organs were implanted into people awaiting these organs. Yes, you son's spirit still lives on, Ricky! Now, don't you worry. You live your life happy and free from pain and worry. lol your friend forever, liberty justice
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Tour so sweet.
Another written just for you!
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, No Relief 2003, marks the fifteen year date that Jason's tissues made it possible for others to live. I powerful time for you to recall and commemorate.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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This poem, No Relief 2003, marks the fifteen year date that Jason's tissues made it possible for others to live. I powerful time for you to recall and commemorate.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time Bill.
Enjoy Easter tomorrowRicky.
Comment from karenina
Bless you as you keep Jason's memory alive and promote organ donation. I hope you have a blessed Easter my friend. Keep in mind you and Jason will meet again!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Bless you as you keep Jason's memory alive and promote organ donation. I hope you have a blessed Easter my friend. Keep in mind you and Jason will meet again!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thanks ever so much for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
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My Pleasure! Happy Easter!---Karenina
Comment from Katya
I think that this very likely came out of great feeling, and that the writing itself may have been extremely therapeutic. I don't want to seem negative about such a good and significant thing. As a reader, however, I felt confused and scared; it is too emotional and chaotic for me.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I think that this very likely came out of great feeling, and that the writing itself may have been extremely therapeutic. I don't want to seem negative about such a good and significant thing. As a reader, however, I felt confused and scared; it is too emotional and chaotic for me.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thanks and keep writing
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very strong verse you have written and shared with us. It is poignant and deeply emotional and I thank you for posting it. Also, the author's notes about organ donation were a big plus. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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This is a very strong verse you have written and shared with us. It is poignant and deeply emotional and I thank you for posting it. Also, the author's notes about organ donation were a big plus. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I call our constantly coming up with and organizing the words which have been flowing around in our hearts, "conveyor belt work. A bit like Lucy with those chocolates coming her way to be wrapped just so. So because as you said you composed these in less than 5 min. I can relate. In my haste I've made several errprs caught be a reviewer or two. So just to get a few logistics out of the way: dissapate ..dissipate and I agsin dream...again ..."I now finally... is it supposed to be know?
I like the lines.."A time when I can be.. "More than me..." This makes the storyline very universal. Many of the readers will have the same longing in their hearts...what a nice ending which is actually a new beginning, a second chance.
The 2nd poem is very compelling with the speaker being Jason. Very nice work. I hope it was healing to be able to write it.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I call our constantly coming up with and organizing the words which have been flowing around in our hearts, "conveyor belt work. A bit like Lucy with those chocolates coming her way to be wrapped just so. So because as you said you composed these in less than 5 min. I can relate. In my haste I've made several errprs caught be a reviewer or two. So just to get a few logistics out of the way: dissapate ..dissipate and I agsin dream...again ..."I now finally... is it supposed to be know?
I like the lines.."A time when I can be.. "More than me..." This makes the storyline very universal. Many of the readers will have the same longing in their hearts...what a nice ending which is actually a new beginning, a second chance.
The 2nd poem is very compelling with the speaker being Jason. Very nice work. I hope it was healing to be able to write it.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
