My Brothers' Keeper
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Her Surroundings."Rachel feels responsible for her brother.
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
She doesn't need the cot and she blushed. Hmmm. Maybe she's being a little more pushy that I thought. Lol. I love the description of the cave. Are there any caves like that for sale? And I loved "Her mind scrambled to convert that to kilograms-about 55." You are so bilingual with measurements! Enjoyed this chapter!
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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She doesn't need the cot and she blushed. Hmmm. Maybe she's being a little more pushy that I thought. Lol. I love the description of the cave. Are there any caves like that for sale? And I loved "Her mind scrambled to convert that to kilograms-about 55." You are so bilingual with measurements! Enjoyed this chapter!
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much Helen for reviewing and your comments were great. I will fix that in a moment. I don't know about in the USA but that was the only one in Canada and it is still in the family, they are native and it has been passed down and updated.
Comment from MelB
Wow! Things are moving along rather quickly! Of course, any guy that rescues you and has an amazing wolf that actually rescues you, is probably a good person.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Wow! Things are moving along rather quickly! Of course, any guy that rescues you and has an amazing wolf that actually rescues you, is probably a good person.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much Mel for reading and reviewing. I enjoy reading your thoughts, I did think the wolf was a good touch.
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You're welcome. I'm an animal lover, so the wolf drew me right into the story.
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High five to animal lovers.
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Yes:)
Comment from Pantygynt
This relationship is certainly getting away to a flying start.
I like the way you describe in some detail, that takes care of all the possible problems, the way in which the cave dwelling is adapted down to to the details of the under-floor insulation and the fire pit.
I imagine the cave is frome some impervious rock, limestone though pretty with stalactites and so forth would be impossibly damp.
Clearly romance is in the air.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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This relationship is certainly getting away to a flying start.
I like the way you describe in some detail, that takes care of all the possible problems, the way in which the cave dwelling is adapted down to to the details of the under-floor insulation and the fire pit.
I imagine the cave is frome some impervious rock, limestone though pretty with stalactites and so forth would be impossibly damp.
Clearly romance is in the air.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing. And for your keen observations. I do like that you read things closely. I truly appreciate your comments.
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The review is not muchg use if you don't.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
"Great, thank you. I don't think we need the cot." She smiled and blushed.
And so she might blush!! That was rather an open invitation and she doesn't really know the man! Mind you, he sounds lovely, and so does Gray. I think he understands English! lol. I enjoyed the imagery of the cave. When I lived in Spain, there are many cave dwellings, that go back centuries. It's funny to see T.V. aerials sticking out of the ground at the top of the cliffs! Now, to find out what will happen next. Another good one, Alie! Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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"Great, thank you. I don't think we need the cot." She smiled and blushed.
And so she might blush!! That was rather an open invitation and she doesn't really know the man! Mind you, he sounds lovely, and so does Gray. I think he understands English! lol. I enjoyed the imagery of the cave. When I lived in Spain, there are many cave dwellings, that go back centuries. It's funny to see T.V. aerials sticking out of the ground at the top of the cliffs! Now, to find out what will happen next. Another good one, Alie! Sandra xxx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Awww thank you Sandra for your kind comments and great observations. Now I agree that it would be funny looking at all those caves and TV antennas . Well I guess at 29 she is a worldly young lady lol, so when the opportunity arises she take advantage. Thanks my friend.
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, wow! Getting interesting! Loved the thorough descriptions of the cave and lifestyle. Well written and interesting throughout. I did notice a couple of typos:
"What was fantastic was that there was a flute (flue) and chimney just above head level when standing,"
"Its (It's) quite a little settlement there, lots of tourist(s) stop for a few days."
I guess I'll have to wait to find out what she is driving at here: "Great, thank you. I don't think we need the cot."
Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Oh, wow! Getting interesting! Loved the thorough descriptions of the cave and lifestyle. Well written and interesting throughout. I did notice a couple of typos:
"What was fantastic was that there was a flute (flue) and chimney just above head level when standing,"
"Its (It's) quite a little settlement there, lots of tourist(s) stop for a few days."
I guess I'll have to wait to find out what she is driving at here: "Great, thank you. I don't think we need the cot."
Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Thank you Marilyn for catching those errors, I will fix them in a moment. I am so glad you are enjoying it, mmm now I will never tell, lol, until you read it.
Comment from Artasylum
Hey aryr... he can crab it from the general store. I think you might me grab... Fun story, good read. and Clever Rachael weaving a web around Todd... yours, diana
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Hey aryr... he can crab it from the general store. I think you might me grab... Fun story, good read. and Clever Rachael weaving a web around Todd... yours, diana
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and then taking the time to review. Opps, I will correct that in a moment, thanks for catching it. I really appreciate your kind comments.
