Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Patricia,

I am visiting the site today (I am off work today) and decided to read one of your poems, which always provide inspiration. This one is no different, my friend. It provides much light to God's light. Thank you.

I hope you are doing well. Did you move yet?

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review. I have not yet moved, 5 weeks from tonight I will be in my new place. I sold my home here and will take a nice nest egg with me to invest.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

You did a great job with the spaceship format. It looks just like it's supposed to. You have a message of hope in this, with Jesus lighting the way so that others may follow. One thing to consider--lots of use of the word "light" for such a short poem. Maybe you can find synonyms. judi

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review.Five weeks from tonight I will be in my new residence.

reply by judiverse on 29-Mar-2018

You're welcome. Sounds like it will be a good move for you. Best wishes. judi

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Jesus Christ means everything to me. Without his light shining in my life, I would drown in my own misery. He helps me function. Your poem expresses the need to share His love with others. I believe in doing that we are doubly blessed. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, praise Jesus Who is the Light of the world. And praise Him that He can use us to reflect His light to help others come to Him and be healed and live in the Light of Life.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

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Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patricia. As always, I like your spaceship form so much and this one has a perfect shape and form. Words flow well in this faith poem. Living in the light is a fine place to be. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a beautiful well-written poem as always love the spaceship format. As I was reading it a song I use to sing as a child came to mind, This Little Light of Mine. So thank you for bringing back the pleasant memory, take care.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. It gives me hope that the lights will keep shining forever, and the love of God will flow easily from one person to the next. Thank you so much for sharing this, Patricia!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 31-Mar-2018

You're welcome, Patricia.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

What you say in your poem seems such a simple thing to do... however, we make it difficult. The world would be a much nicer place if we all lit the way for others.
I love these spaceships of yours.
Thanks.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is another lovely and inspiring poem. Beautifully written and I do like your spaceship style. I do hope all is going well for you, and you are not working too hard.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem you have penned in the format of a spaceship. This is a very nice creation by you my friend. You used great descriptive words letting us know we are to let our lights shine before men. Great job! love, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018

Thank you for the nice review, Teri.